Wtf?

[YuNg NePtUnE]

chillin sittin on the porch
rockin air force 1's and lisenin to scott storch
lookin all round look fer a gurl
saw this lovely woman told her i would make her toes curl
she gave me a look like i was sick
she took me to her crib and i whooped out my magic stick
she deepthroated that muthafuckin shit
she chockin on my cum she pulled down her pants wanted to lick her clit
had my eyes closed went down to the groin i started to lick
i notice there was somethin long and thick
this gurl had a cock i started to yell
i new there was no fish smell
this gurl was a man!
i said theres no fuckin way i dont understand
you fine as hell how could this be
said her name was steve
wtf is goin on is this a dream?
i jus licked a cock and i brought the whipped cream
put on my shoes all mad as fuck
got in me dodge truck
she ran outside and said baby dont go
all touchin all ova my fro
i pushed her away
she said please stay
drove off to the doctors to check fer std's
i figured out i had HIV
after that i never fucked wit a ho
my craving fer sex started to grow

[YuNg NePtUnE]

the rhymes are wack but its just supposed to be funny its jus a quick thing

[M.W.W.]

ummmmm this was kinda funny but wack at the same time, no real highlights or good points about this the rhyme scheme was fucked, the rhymes where simplistic, and you talked about lickin some dude dick that you thought was a girl overall i say you need to 1. grow up and get serious, and 2. not write gay shit like this and post it on a site with 90% of them members being male


also drop your two links or they will close it

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