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Reflexion
Gho$t Wrighter
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MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
wow this will take forever to close..
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MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Ghost i won't read you a bed time story and give you a little kiss son
cuz u gettin a fucking L in this battle and i cant help ya on dis one
jesus christ, stop actin ghetto you wigger, you aint fuckin black
Ghost W. u pussy bitch' never seen a real block like Arizona running backs
GH ur corny and wack, feel my first punch ...ur wack, ill leave u dead
Now ima expose you, for sleepin with more pansies than a flower bed
Your getting fucked up kid, with these hits that leave you torn,
GH you only kick it between the legs, like watching gay porn!
After this battle ur Noob crew will wonder whos living.
GH ya punches have poor attraction like soup kitchen
bitch, its confusing, your face or your bars i duno whats werse,
so ima shoot them both up,
n' if i run outta CAPS i'll use the ones in your verse.
your wack, but first ima tear you to peices yo
coz you couldnt lay down a good key..
..if you was a fucking piano.
some of us are good at rap, but you... we'll see son,
coz when you mess with me i'll leave ya missing like ya fucking location.
dudes dope, i'ld crack under pressure to decypher his rhymes,
n' when let some coke addicts try ya verse
they said they aint into wack lines.
i'll check the mirror, n' see what the truth is son,
coz i thought i was fucking wack for a sec, but i was looking at Reflexion.
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Ghost i won't read you a bed time story and give you a little kiss son
cuz u gettin a fucking L in this battle and i cant help ya on dis one
weak.
jesus christ, stop actin ghetto you wigger, you aint fuckin black
Ghost W. u pussy bitch' never seen a real block like Arizona running backs
nice concept, wording could be better
GH ur corny and wack, feel my first punch ...ur wack, ill leave u dead
Now ima expose you, for sleepin with more pansies than a flower bed
lol. again worded different would be better
Your getting fucked up kid, with these hits that leave you torn,
GH you only kick it between the legs, like watching gay porn!
nah.
After this battle ur Noob crew will wonder whos living.
GH ya punches have poor attraction like soup kitchen
weak.
vs
bitch, its confusing, your face or your bars i duno whats werse,
so ima shoot them both up,
n' if i run outta CAPS i'll use the ones in your verse.
meh, played.
your wack, but first ima tear you to peices yo
coz you couldnt lay down a good key..
..if you was a fucking piano.
lol, i liked this one.
some of us are good at rap, but you... we'll see son,
coz when you mess with me i'll leave ya missing like ya fucking location.
lol.
dudes dope, i'ld crack under pressure to decypher his rhymes,
n' when let some coke addicts try ya verse
they said they aint into wack lines.
nice concept
i'll check the mirror, n' see what the truth is son,
coz i thought i was fucking wack for a sec, but i was looking at Reflexion.
decent.
I think ghostwriter one this battle hands down with more quotables. Ghost lines were worded way better, had better concepts, and pulled off a few punches and personals. Reflexion, I think if you work on your wording you would improve quite a bit...because the concepts are there its just the wording that was off...also, try and research ur opponent a little because this guy has other aliases you could have got personals from, not a bad verse but not great.
vote=ghostwriter
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Ghost i won't read you a bed time story and give you a little kiss son
cuz u gettin a fucking L in this battle and i cant help ya on dis one
nope
jesus christ, stop actin ghetto you wigger, you aint fuckin black
Ghost W. u pussy bitch' never seen a real block like Arizona running backs
same as above
GH ur corny and wack, feel my first punch ...ur wack, ill leave u dead
Now ima expose you, for sleepin with more pansies than a flower bed
lol ok
Your getting fucked up kid, with these hits that leave you torn,
GH you only kick it between the legs, like watching gay porn!
nah
After this battle ur Noob crew will wonder whos living.
GH ya punches have poor attraction like soup kitchen
no
bitch, its confusing, your face or your bars i duno whats werse,
so ima shoot them both up,
n' if i run outta CAPS i'll use the ones in your verse.
meh
your wack, but first ima tear you to peices yo
coz you couldnt lay down a good key..
..if you was a fucking piano.
cool
some of us are good at rap, but you... we'll see son,
coz when you mess with me i'll leave ya missing like ya fucking location.
ok
dudes dope, i'ld crack under pressure to decypher his rhymes,
n' when let some coke addicts try ya verse
they said they aint into wack lines.
meh, reword
i'll check the mirror, n' see what the truth is son,
coz i thought i was fucking wack for a sec, but i was looking at Reflexion.
no
meh, the piano line won it for me.. everything else in this battle was below average.. escu had some decent concepts but they were executed poorly which made them less effective.
vote - escu
wtf wit u d/r'z?
upping
both had good tite flow. both had sum coo punches.......
ghost did have sum extra poetics thrown in as well tho. and had a more flexible and natural flow in a way. also had some good puns which do seem to liven up the verse as does wordplay.... puns was used well by ghost. and punches was delivered sharper and more direct than reflex
both was coo tho f'sho
b.//
vote-ghost
titer punches puns n word
pz1
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Originally Posted by Reflexion
[1] ^^hahahahastop swaying..
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Ghost i won't read you a bed time story and give you a little kiss son
cuz u gettin a fucking L in this battle and i cant help ya on dis one
weak opener
jesus christ, stop actin ghetto you wigger, you aint fuckin black
Ghost W. u pussy bitch' never seen a real block like Arizona running backs
also weak
GH ur corny and wack, feel my first punch ...ur wack, ill leave u dead
Now ima expose you, for sleepin with more pansies than a flower bed
ok..
Your getting fucked up kid, with these hits that leave you torn,
GH you only kick it between the legs, like watching gay porn!
no played
After this battle ur Noob crew will wonder whos living.
GH ya punches have poor attraction like soup kitchen
no...weak
vs.
bitch, its confusing, your face or your bars i duno whats werse,
so ima shoot them both up,
n' if i run outta CAPS i'll use the ones in your verse.
meh...ok
your wack, but first ima tear you to peices yo
coz you couldnt lay down a good key..
..if you was a fucking piano.
nice..
some of us are good at rap, but you... we'll see son,
coz when you mess with me i'll leave ya missing like ya fucking location.
ok...decent
dudes dope, i'ld crack under pressure to decypher his rhymes,
n' when let some coke addicts try ya verse
they said they aint into wack lines.
meh.. needed better wording
i'll check the mirror, n' see what the truth is son,
coz i thought i was fucking wack for a sec, but i was looking at Reflexion.
eh... weak closer
Well this was a one sided battle in my perspective. Not many DIRECT punche's were thrown by Ref. You have to come alot more original cause most of your verse seem played. You also have to come more direct with wordplay & punche's. Ghost you had some ok punche's & good one's. I felt you could have came alot harder though with more wittier punche's. But you had an overall nice vere which was more direct.
v/Go$t.
some of us are good at rap, but you... we'll see son,
coz when you mess with me i'll leave ya missing like ya fucking location
dudes dope, i'ld crack under pressure to decypher his rhymes,
n' when let some coke addicts try ya verse
they said they aint into wack lines.
vs.
jesus christ, stop actin ghetto you wigger, you aint fuckin black
Ghost W. u pussy bitch' never seen a real block like Arizona running backs
overall/-decent battle.Gota say that.Ghost got this with more cosistancy..a lil more.
V/-Ghost.
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