Silk Sheet Music

[Moniker]

Silk Sheet Music.

A crow amongst vultures,
picking apart your skull
to sulk in sound sculptures.
Lets carry vinyl to build a nest
with minds like rotten eggs,
waiting to hatch static
and infest the atmosphere as
hash is blasted out of kegs;
standing on the speaker.

We weave through electricity
together, our bodies become
tethers better equipped for
a drama induced coma from
the crypt; cable is my blanket.
Grip the snug outlets and plug
them into my empty eye sockets.

Our ears are solar panels
that Clear Channel can't
brand with bland signals.
I'm told It's not polite to stereo.
I kissed the speakers between
blushed cheeks and got mono,
so don't use that tone with me.

We play deaf
but death is listening.

College pirates pilot like
Pontius with consciousness
aimed at the sparrows.
I'm whispering mic checks,
asking when did broadcasts
become so narrow?

Radio killed
the literary heart.
(videos were just
cameos used to
chart stardom)

The airwaves goodbye.
Give my disregards to lucifer.
Tell him hell needs more
reverb, and to play our song
in reverse.

[Moniker]

meh.

[B.I.Detained.]

Links? I give you time because I like your face ;-z

[Atti]

Here, I've got links for him...
Since their mine I'll give you 4 so this can stay open.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=298712
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299042
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299216
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=280781

[Atti]

Simply... Amazing man. I've yet to find one piece of yours that I didn't entirely love. This was great, wordplay, both literal and figerative were beautiful. All of the content was very fluent both in a rhyming standpoint and in regards to its contintuety.

'cable is my blanket.
Grip the snug outlets and plug
them into my empty eye sockets. '

I loved that part. The imagery in this piece was so intesnly creative, and gave such vivid yet obscure mental images. The emotion was on point aswell, from start to finish I loved the piece. Great job fams.

[LedgenZ]

Alright dude, I don’t know which fuckin’ planet you came from, but one things for certain – its damn sure not Earth! Seriously, your like the Clark Kent/Superman of RB. In most threads you seem like and everyday day member, people post, you comment, leave a little insightful feed here and there, shoot some opinions down and build others up, laugh, talk, bullshit, you know regular shit. Then the next thing you know, you’ve disappeared for a week – comeback, drop a verse – and leave the rest of us with our mouths open – “like where the fuck did that come from”, at least that the impression you leave me with after reading this verse. I mean DAMN dawg your wordplay is fuckin’ insane, incredible, nothing short of amazing and about two notches above magnificent! The way you play on words reminds of Sage Francis ….. Don’t get me wrong this piece has Mindless written all over it, form head to toe, it’s definitely and original creation, but your two styles do favor. You know what dude (ooops – excuse me for interrupting myself – I deeply apologize Ledgenz) this post is fuckin’ amazing. LOL


Favorite lines:
the crypt; cable is my blanket.
Grip the snug outlets and plug
them into my empty eye sockets.

^Wow….

Also:
I'm told It's not polite to stereo.
I kissed the speakers between
blushed cheeks and got mono,

^You’re a clever superhero, aren’t you?

Then again:
We play deaf
but death is listening.

^Man…huh…thaaaaaats ill

Of course;
aimed at the sparrows.
I'm whispering mic checks,
asking when did broadcasts
become so narrow?

^Truthfully I’m doing this piece a grave injustice by picking it apart, to be honest this verse should be quoted in its entirety, as a collective its just that inspiring.


I never say this, but I feel compelled to, stop doing your thing man, your making the rest of us look bad.


Peace.

[Illustrious.]

very different and interesting topic...i liked it...i always like reading something different and creative..this was a very nice poetic peice...i felt the flow throughout and the good rhyme scheme..great wordplay through and through........excellent imagery..i had a crystal clear picture in my mind due to your nice vocab usage...and overall this was a very nice peice...keep it up.

[GREVISS]

the word play is ill...whats more impressive is ya technique
definitely an individual style crafted with intellegent intentions
nice...

[Moniker]

Thanks fellas.

Word to Atticus for supplying links, appreciate it.
and Ledge, my last names Clark. No cape though.

[Twixn...]

good stuff here bro... as always had a poetic feel to it, but you made it glide well enough to be an om... the eerie almost moribd feel went well, i like to write in this style stometimes... but not at all the same... great work, i think ive learned alot from looking at your peices over the time ive been here...

im a prob start writing again, we should collab after ss is over.

[~SILENT~]

Simply... Amazing man. I've yet to find one piece of yours that I didn't entirely love. This was great, wordplay, both literal and figerative were beautiful. All of the content was very fluent both in a rhyming standpoint and in regards to its contintuety.

'cable is my blanket.
Grip the snug outlets and plug
them into my empty eye sockets. '

I loved that part. The imagery in this piece was so intesnly creative, and gave such vivid yet obscure mental images. The emotion was on point aswell, from start to finish I loved the piece. Great job fams.

this was definatley a great and AMAZING piece from you AGAIN mindless...see i like how the name suites people personality and way of art...this piece had a great depth in emotino and creativity FAR from beyond WOW's and AMAZING's...The vocabulary and sense of rhyme was just executed so splendid...

RTF on the one in my sig.

[YuNg NePtUnE]

this is good dawg i liked it it had a lot of good vocab and detail it flowed well to keep writin i wana read more from u

[Moniker]

appreciate it guys.