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  1. June 27th, 2006, 05:28 AM #1
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    Quick Key


    dropped this in Sickness REC tryout

    my raps physically cause mental explosions, eruptions.....w/e u name it
    or blame it, on uh birth uncontrolled wit plays God can't even game it
    like short showers i'll reign quick, don't mind my cock ur aim is brain, dick
    ashamed vics, dont even want it wit me, most they're "shots" r "aim"less
    apologize? my chrome do, after attemptin 2 blow u away like a ho do
    expose u, ur "thoughts" not uh threat...unlike suicidal mistakes,
    .................................................. ............"minds"(mines) kill who its pose to
    could roast dudes one by one, no need 4 weaponry these bars r guns
    all off da top 4 fun, but when a 'tracks around', in that 'circle' i'ma 'run'!
    typical emcees would beg me 4 ghost written lines, fiend for attraction
    from otha men den say u ain gay...must b dat egotistic pride attackin'
    unconditional flows extracting, from brains period...leakin contractions
    verbally masterin, fundamentally sound portions of lyrical transactions!
    dez actions of mine aren't simply amazin, but enough 2 develop soon
    tha rhyme so in tune, its on a trans...mission, hear da zoom zoom zoom
    when it ride off, slowly....neva could be fucked fast like slide offs, holy..
    shit, after da music splits....u'll get ripped quick in acapella
    .......................................how am i da "slave" if no "beat" can hold me?!


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  2. June 27th, 2006, 05:36 AM #2
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    Yeah This Was A Pretty Decent Free(Key)Style Hav. Great Use Of Vocab And Multis.

    Best Line.

    unconditional flows extracting, from brains period...leakin contractions
    verbally masterin, fundamentally sound portions of lyrical transactions!

    Str8 Dope Bar That Bruh.

    Not Really Much Else To Say Except Job Well Done.

    Props.
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  3. June 27th, 2006, 05:37 AM #3
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  4. June 27th, 2006, 06:36 AM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hav

    dropped this in Sickness REC tryout

    my raps physically cause mental explosions, eruptions.....w/e u name it
    or blame it, on uh birth uncontrolled wit plays God can't even game it
    ^ nice

    like short showers i'll reign quick, don't mind my cock ur aim is brain, dick
    ashamed vics, dont even want it wit me, most they're "shots" r "aim"less
    ^ awesome, nice vocab/multies

    apologize? my chrome do, after attemptin 2 blow u away like a ho do
    expose u, ur "thoughts" not uh threat...unlike suicidal mistakes,
    .................................................. ............"minds"(mines) kill who its pose to
    ^ lol, nice n funny

    could roast dudes one by one, no need 4 weaponry these bars r guns
    all off da top 4 fun, but when a 'tracks around', in that 'circle' i'ma 'run'!
    ^ nice

    typical emcees would beg me 4 ghost written lines, fiend for attraction
    from otha men den say u ain gay...must b dat egotistic pride attackin'
    ^ nice n funny lmao

    unconditional flows extracting, from brains period...leakin contractions
    verbally masterin, fundamentally sound portions of lyrical transactions!
    ^ best bar

    dez actions of mine aren't simply amazin, but enough 2 develop soon
    tha rhyme so in tune, its on a trans...mission, hear da zoom zoom zoom
    ^ lmao, nice wordplay

    when it ride off, slowly....neva could be fucked fast like slide offs, holy..
    shit, after da music splits....u'll get ripped quick in acapella
    .......................................how am i da "slave" if no "beat" can hold me?!
    ^ nice finisher

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    overall// it was a nice peice, it had everything i was looking for. personals/punches/flow/structue.. but it just lacked that bit of "OW! Factor". Its good to see that people getting into OM instead of just battling. id rate this a 8/10. But you very much have potential.

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  5. June 27th, 2006, 09:35 AM #5
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    This was aight the flwo was very good in parts due to multiples being used. I liked the whole thing but it never had a straight concept or idea. It was more like as if your writing one thing and then jumping straight onto a nother. I reckon you should spen some time on one solid concept and i reckon you'll do good as i see potential.
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  6. June 27th, 2006, 11:52 PM #6
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    nice piece i agree with Mak on the fact that it was a lot of good concepts but most were un-related, wordplay vocab multis all were on point, only thing i would say is to stick to one idea or concept. dope flow though it was an emjoyable read. stay up.
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  7. July 2nd, 2006, 12:35 AM #7
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  8. July 2nd, 2006, 01:24 AM #8
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    raw an dope drop home boi..... feelin the creativity an vocab was ill too..... keep it up an keep it sharp dawg... 8.4/10
    I dont claim to be the best...... but stay to fuck outta my way.....


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  9. July 2nd, 2006, 01:59 PM #9
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    good lookin fam.....UPPIN


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  10. July 2nd, 2006, 05:21 PM #10
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mak P
    This was aight the flwo was very good in parts due to multiples being used. I liked the whole thing but it never had a straight concept or idea. It was more like as if your writing one thing and then jumping straight onto a nother. I reckon you should spen some time on one solid concept and i reckon you'll do good as i see potential.

    Just so you know this is my comments as i'll be using it as a linkage in my new om, thanks.
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  11. July 3rd, 2006, 11:53 AM #11
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    aight then^^

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    It had flow and that was about it. The content was very lacluster and uneventful, it was half "I'm dope" and half "lets be deep." I really can't stand those strives for self pomotion, they really just come off as lame and egotistical. I dont know, piece just didn't do much for me. But you seem to have a general sense of how to fomulate an Om, so I'll keep my eye out for an actual topical style piece.

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    true, i only did tha self-glory theme cuz it was a tryout 4 ah crew...appreciate ya honest opinion, i'll check ya oms too


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