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Thread: yeah its a fuckin love song...

  1. #1
    DiRe_1
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    yeah its a fuckin love song...

    ...but so what just judge the lyrics and give me some honest feed bac, thanx

    v1]
    yo lately it seems everyones been so pessimistic/
    but me ive got reasons to remain optimistic/
    i know that im gonna make it that i can survive/
    and i know i couldnt have done it witout u in my live/
    still not everything is well or even or all right/
    cuz everyday is another challenge, a struggle, or fight/
    these are hard times theres no doubt about it/
    its not fun having to put up wit all of this shit/
    see we may trip, falter and fall/
    but together we can conquer all/
    now i know, now i can see/
    just how much ur lovin really means to me/

    [chorus]
    just know that ur loving is appreciated/
    and that ill always remain dedicated/
    remember that no matter what shit happens in the hood/
    as long as we got eachother itll be all good/

    [v2]
    i have been put in a position to be hated upon/
    day after day nite after nite the shit just goes on & on/
    i had this anger inside me that rages like a fire/
    and as these fags continuly push me the flames just get higher/
    this is a worlds a fucked up place this day in age/
    thats what got me in this fit of rage/
    but then i realize that u love me/
    and its like the hate and anger goes away completely/
    cuz when we chill something about u just puts me at ease/
    and i love tthe way you play hard to get when u tease/
    baby girl i put u above all the rest/
    becuz the way that u love is the very best/

    [chorus]

    [v3]
    my life has been hard, yeah been rough/
    just tryin to get by has always been tough/
    i have had to distance my self, trustin noone/
    constantly watchin my back, it was no fun/
    but in u ive finally found someone whos absolutely faithful/
    the comfort u provide me gives me reasons to be thankful/
    no words can really describe the way u make me feel/
    cuz i know that i dont deserve ur lovin and ur sex appeal/
    as long as we a couple we got it going on together/
    and because of this i will always love you, forever/
    when it comes down to it ur above/
    cuz ur the only one that ill ever love/

    [chorus]

    [v4]
    i know that im not the only living this hard time/
    but know as long as we together itll be just fine/
    for the rest of my life, no matter what i do/
    just know that ill always be here for u/
    baby girl in me u can trust wit out hesitation/
    cuz being together is enough in itself, instant gratification/
    thts y I took the time to write this, cuz of ur dedication/
    and u got me loving u without reservation/
    girl uve got me wrapped up in ur lovin and genorsity/
    no longer do i feel the hate and the anger inside me, only pity/
    for those who dont share the love that we do/
    just know that for what its worth ill always love u/

    [chorus]

  2. #2
    PleDge
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    yo lately it seems everyones been so pessimistic/
    but me ive got reasons to remain optimistic/
    i know that im gonna make it that i can survive/
    and i know i couldnt have done it witout u in my live/
    thst first bit was tght

    ya lost it in the middle somwhere but ya gt it back....nice drop

  3. #3
    DiRe_1
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    tahnx man

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    I liked this alot........Ill piece..............Return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthrea...458#post464458

  5. #5
    DiRe_1
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    uppin one last time

  6. #6
    DiRe_1
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    aight upping again

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    That is some hard shit. Since youve taken the time to read my shit I will read yours. That is a nice drop. Good Vocab use and yo gril should love it. I think that you got alot of talent and will be doin some hard shit in da future. You should start battlein dawg.

    Anyway good drop.

    holla at yo boy
    ~ShEmY~

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    DiRe_1
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    Aight fo sho. I gotta talk to you bout somtin. IM gonna Private Messange you aight?

  10. #10
    DiRe_1
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    got it man i sent u a pm bac

  11. #11
    MC 808
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    This shit was very tight. very nice dawg. enjoyed readin it. Keep elevatin. Peace!

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