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Thread: Upsetting the Karma...(feat dopestspitaeva

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    Upsetting the Karma...(feat dopestspitaeva

    dopest..1
    NiNjah 2


    I touch keys w/ such ease painting fresh panorama
    Dramatise raps; cats is trapped in the mist of karma
    Born surely a mortal, but that’s just corporeal
    Conflicting to spiritual & the ceaseless ethereal
    Thoughts dangle… I view life from a twisted angle
    This mystic tangle is something of a risk to handle
    Gamble w/ death, dicing odds, GOD is mad at me
    Tragedy seems to be part of my daily strategy
    Piercing strings echo thru my earlobes annoyingly
    Drinking in sin, blazed to brim, deny it’s destroying me
    Still no grin graces my grim face most day’s at-least
    Satan offers…
    ......things no strings, but I know he plays for keeps
    Once people raise the beast, evil decays the peace
    So many slaves sold cheap, so many graves dug deep
    Even thugs weep occasional, that’s when shits serious
    It’s furious, when flames spit heat gets delirious
    Curious kittens be getting frazzled w/ shrapnel
    Muffled rifles ricochet around homicidal rivals

    Lights camera action–packed, catch the silver-screen debut
    Treading hot steps thru hell, slapping devils on the way thru
    Immortalize souls, searching high we visualize goals
    & emphasize hopes, I lean on one of Zechariahs quotes…
    There is a voice of the howling of the shepherds, for their glory is spoiled
    A voice of the roaring of young lions, for the pride of Jordan is spoiled

    Life’s cheap nowadays the only thing that’s important is oil
    The melting-pot rages, the misled stays caught in its boil
    Eating genetic groceries… chemical quirks hurting the soil
    Dr Death stands on the scaffold waiting to tighten his coil
    My neck aches in a noose, seduced by useless kicks & boosts
    I simply rip abuse sick to the shoes, shady tricks -&- moves
    Sometimes hit-the-roof, popping-off as if I got shit to prove
    Many try talking in wisdom, & I mostly skip the truth
    All for the rake of a half-baked perception w/o weight
    Never in the right place, I doubt fate will be nice for my sake
    Unless I raise a brand-new mind-set & persona
    Until then I just keep fucking upsetting the karma…

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    hot drop..nice flow multies and vacab...i liked the deepness and creativity in there

    join me and thoery's crew:::mind elavated:::
    you got skillz ya down??
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    damn shit hott too

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    uhm. yeah thanx for reading yo.
    any advance on the feedback????????????????


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