^thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin this, wake up people!
^thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin this, wake up people!
yo vik dope dropo............the thing about food really got to me cuz its only a topical yet so true.........oh and all dese people are wrong when they say vik:
IS A DUDE
OR MAN
GET IT RIGHT DUMBASSES ITS A GIRL
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Pieces:
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
this was quite an enjoyable peice,and fr your second OM it was extremey good,you have a lot of talent.....if you keep elevating you could make very good name for yourself on this board. this peice had very good imagery in it and I think that is what stuck out the most......very nice and original topic,your concepts were very good too. I think you could have reworded some parts to make it sound better and maybe worked a bit on the structure adding in a few multi-strings here and there,but yea this was a very good peice for someone who is relatively new to writing OMs....keep dropping and I'll keep reading,read SS verses and the OM tutorials to help with your elevation. pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=298712
^hit that up plz.
Last edited by Witty; June 24th, 2006 at 08:10 PM
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
24 x OM Hall Of Fame
Posting Rules
Reply With Quote