10 lines
ill drop 1st
no feeding
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no free posting
no favored votes
ill drop in a half hour
Chrit
QB SNYPER
10 lines
ill drop 1st
no feeding
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no free posting
no favored votes
ill drop in a half hour
When the caps-comet-to-finish-this, well that's-just-ya-endin'-bitch/
cuz "you" and "me" don't "add up" like kid's who's "bad-at-arithmetic"/
like "smart whale's" I "spout"-reasons/
not that you could doubt-even, that you "lack elements" like a "desert in drought-season"/
who's this proper~dude, dunno, but I'll beat you til your oddish-blue/
while you "stack" with "more filler lines" than a "pile of college-ruled"/
I'll roll-back-and-pitch, a whole-batch-of-clips/
cuz chrit won't kill, it's not "in his character" like he got "wrote-out-the-script"/
better than you, I come twice-as-good, while you stay home wit' a mic-and-hood/
"Shittin" around with your "bars" like "bathin after not whipin'-good"/
POST WITHIN A HALF HOUR CHRIT
Aight look
Check another anemic kid, ruin his pretty record without one second of hesitation/
Watch the evolution of lyrical lashings replace all those quotations with lethal lacerations/
Bout to give the new kid lesson in elevation by spitting the perfect words/
Watch him crumble like OJ's defense he's worried when not fighting herbs/
11 minutes for ten lines this kids a little slow in the head/
Pressure has gotten to him like a fat camps top bunk beds/
Sniper raps to eat... no wonder dumb fuck is a light weight/
Only time you resemble a heavyweight is when it was my dick you ate/
Sorry to break the news but you lost this game of twenty one/
You got a twenty and I pulled blackjack I guess that means Chrit won(1)/
AI
sharpen the hatchets....lol....prepare the votes
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Im gonna have to go with QB on this one...I just was more into it ...
I'll roll-back-and-pitch, a whole-batch-of-clips/
cuz chrit won't kill, it's not "in his character" like he got "wrote-out-the-script"/
^^ really liked that line...Vote QB better punches
QB had the better flow, constant rhymes in the lines. Chrit punched harder and was more complex
VOTE ---> Chrit
someone poll me up at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=49645
sorry to free-post, *looks at qb snypers sig.*.....but QB u one sick muthafucka, u should go c help playa seriously^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
ok
multis : QB
metas :Chrit
flow : QB
Punches: Chrit
complexity : Chrit
so over all very good battle, both sides played verse real well..
but in my opniion chrit took this one..
.WP. .. It' Still Perfect..
CHRIT HAD A PERFECT ENDING...Originally posted by Chrit
Sorry to break the news but you lost this game of twenty one/
You got a twenty and I pulled blackjack I guess that means Chrit won(1)/
^^I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IN THE MIDDLE OF YOUR RHYME, ITS LIKE YOU FELL OFF N PERSONALLY I DONT KNOW ANYONE WHO STILL CALLS PEOPLE HERBS...Originally posted by Chrit
Bout to give the new kid lesson in elevation by spitting the perfect words/
Watch him crumble like OJ's defense he's worried when not fighting herbs/
THOSE 4 LINES DID IT FOR ME, IT WAS HOT.Originally posted by QB SNYPER
who's this proper~dude, dunno, but I'll beat you til your oddish-blue/
while you "stack" with "more filler lines" than a "pile of college-ruled"/
I'll roll-back-and-pitch, a whole-batch-of-clips/
cuz chrit won't kill, it's not "in his character" like he got "wrote-out-the-script"/
ENDING WAS PERFECT AS WELL SO I'LL GIVE THE BREAKDOWN...Originally posted by QB SNYPER
better than you, I come twice-as-good, while you stay home wit' a mic-and-hood/
"Shittin" around with your "bars" like "bathin after not whipin'-good"/
METAPHORS..QB
PUNCHES..BOTH (MOSTLY QB)
CREATIVITY..BOTH
PERSONALS..CHRIT
MULTIS..QB
COMPLEXITY..CHRIT
FLOW..BOTH
OVERALL..QB
I FEEL CHRIT HELD BACK TOO MUCH & COULDA DID BETTER.
Last edited by BROOKLYN; May 25th, 2003 at 01:36 PM
yeah i gotta say chrit didn't come with his A game on this one
QB
cuz chrit won't kill, it's not "in his character" like he got "wrote-out-the-script
^hot and the college ruled line
chrit man
Sorry to break the news but you lost this game of twenty one/
You got a twenty and I pulled blackjack I guess that means Chrit won
^that was the best line at the end for me
gonna have to give this to QB for better punches and flow.....chrits was more complex but just didnt out do qb's verse
vote QB
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uppin fo' votes
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uppin fo votes
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cant anyone vote?
this is getting slept on
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hmmmm nice battle from the two definatley but my vote goes to QB
11 minutes for ten lines this kids a little slow in the head/
Pressure has gotten to him like a fat camps top bunk beds/
Chrit I liked that line
not that you could doubt-even, that you "lack elements" like a "desert in drought-season"/
who's this proper~dude, dunno, but I'll beat you til your oddish-blue/
while you "stack" with "more filler lines" than a "pile of college-ruled"/
I'll roll-back-and-pitch, a whole-batch-of-clips/
cuz chrit won't kill, it's not "in his character" like he got "wrote-out-the-script"/
QB that was the winning lines
my vote=QB
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