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  1. #1
    You've Earned a Custom Title! Phantom's Avatar
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    unfinished

    imposters impose on my lyrical being...
    but i laugh it off in an hesterical meeting...
    cause the shit i spit has an historical meaning.../
    god said vengance is his ../
    but the darkness in my heart screaming handle yo biz../


    how will this turn out
    my new battle halla at a vote plzzzzz

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    Newbie
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    a yo it was ight to short make it longer a see about mines

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    The Drama Club
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    ..........................WTF.
    From what I've seen this isn't that good.Structure is bad.Flow is ok. Wording needs help. You need to add more also.
    Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
    90% How You React To It.

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    yo dis tha best shit i eva read son, keep on dat, dat'll b dope, u cud beat jus bout ne1 wit dat.....keep up pz

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    Awards 50+ Wins - 50+ Wins SOTW FL Champion
    Diz hit waz ill son, cant git much betta than dat, keep droppin dem dope verses, you would merk any nigga on dis site, 100/100


    Imma fucking gangster.
    lyricalz finest

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