-Tear Drops-

[E Tha Real]

every tear assures insecurity started from his mood of fears?
one comment? since that moment there's been tatooed tears
every tear screams to be skinny. thin. not have mean thighs
died your hair platinum blonde & couldn't lose the green eyes
every tear trickles down your subtle cheeks & mascara drips
a sudden frown & you feel as if you were compared to shit
every tear shadows your lips to grace the hooker red lipstick
while really your soul wish is to staple your mouth shut & zip it
every tear winks to harmony, for which doesn't matter to you
you're body has been metaphysically battered and bruised
every tear writes you off but never as the girl in the magazine
the judgement pen snickers... you pray it was all a bad dream
every tear innuendo's for your personal mold a bitter scene
blonde hair, blue eyes, ecterra though love isn't Hitlers dream
every tear whispers heart burn, as its unfurling your side burns
stomach aches & acne breaks you hate the straightening iron
every tear hints the truth? but why learn, fuck it... oh well
sketch the potrait, break the pastel & forget the toe nails
every tear uses the words that cut the deepest, I believe verbs
maybe I'm wrong, maybe I'm right but lacking three words...

the next tear drops...

another tears drops half a second later...

and before the next tear drops...

I want you to know I love you... just the way you are...

[jfs929]

grrr

[E Tha Real]

up up and away

[E Tha Real]

^what he said.

[Mic.]

pretty nice...topic waz kool..
flow was nice. strucutre was tight
rhymes and multies were good
imagery and vocab was mostly good
overall this was a nice peice i liked it

[E Tha Real]

thank you, I appreciate it

[CrosT Over]

You Need To Leave Two Links Or This Will Get Closed....

When You Leave Feed Links Ill Drop Some Good Feed

[Pursuit]

I like this one because you had the picture showing us what was your perspective on this whole song . you had a nice flow and nice vocabulary and alot of things were on point my dude just keep droping like that and read more and you can get signed if you want

[Philly B. Sparkz]

yuor drop was ok...not great but good.
nice emotion and delivery and nice creativeness of vocabulary. i liked how you cae to the topic and delivered a unique style to it!........
str8 drop man......nice work


RTF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=294363

[LamaGod]

lol @ the dude that said something about getting signed. hahaaha

and this shit was cool E.

a smooth read, short and sweet.

vocab was pretty good, which doesnt matter to me, but RB tends to really care about that shit. wording was a little awkward in a couple of places, but no biggie. the shit as a whole was written pretty good and you did well with the picture. I gotta try writting a topical to a picture, I havent done that yet lol.