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Thread: I Write To The Beat Of... (Nah and Orikle)

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    I Write To The Beat Of... (Nah and Orikle)

    Orikle then Me...

    I Write to the Beat of a Baobab..
    My roots grow Gold - I’m never taking my crown off.
    They said I was so Not - Ever gonna leaf my spirit..
    That my seed was getting lost in a Valley of Pilgrims,
    But When My Ink spilled, I made a Page Silver -
    That Snow patch that sat on my hill was now Finished….
    I took a Leap with a Step Coz I’m bigger than my Shoes..
    Got My eyes On Mecca, Tied My laces with the Roots….
    I Wanna travel like a leaf when the Wind Breathes.
    & Nod my head to God’s Symphony of Bark Strings…
    Plant New Seeds Tomorrow,
    & Don’t rely on The Wisdom You were handed Yesterday,
    Truth Will Profit…
    I’m Nature & For This - I Paint These Statements,
    To Reclaim the Graces that Were Lost when the Planes Hit..
    My Wings Keep Peace, You’ll see My Feathers On the Mountain –
    Coz I Grow Unique Like the Seed Of A Baobab.

    I write to the beat of a night stick, across the head of Don King
    Or the poundin` foot steps of the million man march, haunting
    Scarred wings, as they beat across the mid night sky, while
    Dreamers try catchin` the birth of a sun thru a mid wife`s eyes
    The heart beat of a lady on her death bed thinkin` it`s my time
    In a world where, without a mother or father, the kids might die
    The soundtrack of life, don`t like this song, so I`ll skip right by
    Only takes the push of a button, but am I pushin` for nothin`?
    Or am I...Pushin` toward somethin`, that not even I know of
    In a city that`s quick to get you killed, if you try to show love
    I write to the beat of police sirens, en route to a crime, ready to
    Shoot first & ask later cuz the suspect`s dark skin & brown eyed
    I write to the beat of Mandy, who wants more than a walk to remember
    Instead only gettin` a letter that reads I`ll be gone til September
    I`m flyin` back on the 11th... his destination was Heaven
    And with his last breaths, all he could leave her was a message...
    ...Now, try writin` to his heart beat

    A.i

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    this was a freat drop!.
    nice delivery and sting to it! it flowed well and was str8!. the vocab and mutlies were treally stickin out and catching my attention the most!. nice i really liked this drop! creativity was also the and the execution of performance was well done!. nice mix homies keep it up man and keep dropping them bombs!

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    wow it was a few moments of genius

    I took a Leap with a Step Coz I’m bigger than my Shoes..
    Got My eyes On Mecca, Tied My laces with the Roots….

    mmm, thats cool and not to rely on the wisdom u were handed yesterday is a nice message but it didn't carry all the way thru and the ending was meh

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    faggotish shit..................go hang ur self or quit rappin either one will do us fine.........-10 out of 10

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    Nahlidge i wonder if you used to be down with wordperfect or aghzbakwerdz?
    anyways i seen you mature from a young rookie knuckle head to a hot lyricist with spurts of greatness this was just that elivate some but you did a hot ass drop topic delivery and wordplay usage was all there i felt that twin stay up.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    nice peice..strucutre was kinda off but it flowed well..
    vocab and multies were nice and rhymes were as well..
    topic was interesting and i saw some creativity in this..
    Overall this was a nice read....keep it up..your good~

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    ^ This was a collab. I went first. Nahlidge Second...This is why structure and style is different in both verses. I think its a nice mix, real different - Nah came dope. ...Thanks for the feed though guys.
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    nice i was feeling this piece , creative topic
    flow was on point ,nices multi's both of
    yall verse blended in very well 8/10

    cant i get some feed on this piece i gett
    tired of responing but getting no feedback on my shit http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=292163
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    ^ werd up. I got at you man.
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    i thought this was ill and deep as fuck
    Orikle's part was straight brainfood
    and nah cam witty and lyric.

    this is real ill

    BTW i changed that couplet orikle.

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    this is a great peace man one of the best on rb so far yo
    drop some feed on mine
    you know why i like it
    cause you
    kept it real
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    Good Drop.

    Flow was very well and consistant all the way through. I felt you had a very good choice of vocabulary and executed using it well. You're imagery was amazing made me feel like I was right there. Emotion could have been better but all in all it was good. Overall good drop people. Look forward to seeing more from you. Peace


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    Why WASN'T I ASKED TO BE ON THIS!?

    I liked this concept/topic..dopppppppppppe shit

    Anyway, I felt both parts, but I lost ya'll flow at some parts due to the way ya'll structured the shit, but despite that..this was heavenly..nah your opener was eye catching and dopeasfuck..shit hit me hard..a lot of metaphors and relations to the real world..painted a dope picture

    good shit AI
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    This was dope. I lost the flow at places, which is fine.... it doesn't always have to flow... But flow sets the tone, and in Nahlidge's part I thought adding a certain flow could add an upbeat tone to it. Which, again...in parts it did, but in other parts, could've done better. The concepts from both of these were great though. Different, but both good.

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