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Thread: Real Talk (Collab Lady Harlem & Innovative Mind)Hott Shit

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    Real Talk (Collab Lady Harlem & Innovative Mind)Hott Shit

    It's funny how ya life , can change at any second.
    so i don't complain, every day i count my blessing.
    see life to short to spend time stressing.
    so i listen and learn while i seek direction.
    And it's funny ,how haters wanna see me Fail,,
    instead of me making money,they rather see me in Jail..
    locked behind bars, but hoe i would'nt let that happen..
    So keep On wishing,while my pockets continue to Fatten..
    Niggas quick to scream "Money Over Bitches''.
    but i'm Independent ,Nigga I don't Need Ya Riches...
    So Don't compare me to those hoodrats Chickens,
    bets believe ya gurl ,is on a money making Mission...
    Most Rappers Quick, To Spit About Getting Paid...
    But could'nt stack Chips,, if they work for Better Made....
    I ain't never been Afraid, I don't even know the Defenition..
    every day , i'm out here living with no restrictions..
    Ready for Competition,but most dudes be scared to Shoot,
    but i'll let lose , and leave a hole in you bigger than a hoolla hoop....
    See I was'nt Born Rich , i came up in the Gutter,,
    But my mama raised me, to be a Motherfucking Hustler..
    Fuck Working 9 to 5, trying to Collect a Small Check..
    when i got Clentail and the Right Connect...
    I'm a Paper Chase From Sun Up Til Sun Down,,
    And Run A Dope Operation Like Nino Brown..
    Man Dudes be talking,, but they really don't Prosper..
    They just Front'in,Fucking Window Shoppers..
    I'll show you broke niggas how to get cheddar,,
    Real Talk i speak the truth like a Lie Dector..
    Niggas Out Here Be, Talking about getting Bread,
    but yall really broke, like a pencil with no Lead.
    And Bitches Out here Stay On that Gossip Shit,
    but i don't feed into that Trick,you'll get wit a hollowtip.
    See i'm sexy .......but i stay ready to Riot,,
    test me .....and i'll release shots like Kobe Bryant,,
    It's a New Year, i'm not buying what you selling...
    fuck around and get ya dome split like a Melon..

    Lady Dip Harlem's Verse


    its so funny how life goes, people come people go
    i live for today cause theres no tomorrow
    niggas rather hate than applaud like bravo
    just know theres no imitating my mod-o
    we got our own problems to deal wit
    niggas get laid off, tryna keep it a secret
    niggas on the block making heavy chips
    this the hood, this is how we living
    shyt you come from the hood dont make you gangsta
    i aint a "g" but im far from a wanksta
    the shyt i been through, lord i thank ya
    nigga you got a crew thats pussy, how they gon save ya
    black on black crime is what we seeing the most
    and to white people thats like a toast
    now why we wanna give them something to laugh at
    lets give these crackers something to blast at
    most of yall rapping more tales than truth
    its so funny how ya fans believe you
    my thoughts evil when walking through HRP (Harlem River Projects)
    you aint gotta like but you gon respect me
    im realer than jewels on ya neck
    why talk guns if you aint carrying techs
    fiction stories gon get you where 2pac is (rip)
    i want big checks not minimum wages
    this a movie come take ya places
    most hypocrites go to church, praise Jesus (except my gandma)
    aint been there in years but im a believer
    cause what dont kill you only makes you stronger (mami strong)
    cats gon look at me with a different mind frame
    it dont take a genius to see that ive change
    material things dont mean shyt to me
    what did 8 years ago god took from me
    see what i speak is what the hood did to me
    but i love being here it was meant for me
    even though cats gon try to take ya dignity
    walk in my shoes that'll define Harlem's Queen (HQ)
    nobody taking my name its permanent (like a marker)
    the girl ride alone, dont need no click (fuk a crew)
    you wanna beef shortstop come see the chick
    you aint no "g" when you only popping ya lip (pussy ass niggas)


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    good shit dawg first one I've liked.......so far.......8/10..............good flow and multies throughout the whole piece........hit my shit up it's called Inside My Mind
    If you wanna die, fuck wit me...............BITCH

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    Innovative Mind Verse

    It's funny how ya life , can change at any second.
    so i don't complain, every day i count my blessing.
    see life to short to spend time stressing.
    so i listen and learn while i seek direction.
    And it's funny ,how haters wanna see me Fail,,
    instead of me making money,they rather see me in Jail..
    locked behind bars, but hoe i would'nt let that happen..
    So keep On wishing,while my pockets continue to Fatten..
    Niggas quick to scream "Money Over Bitches''.
    but i'm Independent ,Nigga I don't Need Ya Riches...
    So Don't compare me to those hoodrats Chickens,
    bets believe ya gurl ,is on a money making Mission...
    Most Rappers Quick, To Spit About Getting Paid...
    But could'nt stack Chips,, if they work for Better Made....
    I ain't never been Afraid, I don't even know the Defenition..
    every day , i'm out here living with no restrictions..
    Ready for Competition,but most dudes be scared to Shoot,
    but i'll let lose , and leave a hole in you bigger than a hoolla hoop....
    See I was'nt Born Rich , i came up in the Gutter,,
    But my mama raised me, to be a Motherfucking Hustler..
    Fuck Working 9 to 5, trying to Collect a Small Check..
    when i got Clentail and the Right Connect...
    I'm a Paper Chase From Sun Up Til Sun Down,,
    And Run A Dope Operation Like Nino Brown..
    Man Dudes be talking,, but they really don't Prosper..
    They just Front'in,Fucking Window Shoppers..
    I'll show you broke niggas how to get cheddar,,
    Real Talk i speak the truth like a Lie Dector..
    Niggas Out Here Be, Talking about getting Bread,
    but yall really broke, like a pencil with no Lead.
    And Bitches Out here Stay On that Gossip Shit,
    but i don't feed into that Trick,you'll get wit a hollowtip.
    See i'm sexy .......but i stay ready to Riot,,
    test me .....and i'll release shots like Kobe Bryant,,
    It's a New Year, i'm not buying what you selling...
    fuck around and get ya dome split like a Melon..


    Lady Dip Harlem's Verse

    its so funny how life goes, people come people go
    i live for today cause theres no tomorrow
    niggas rather hate than applaud like bravo
    just know theres no imitating my mod-o
    we got our own problems to deal wit
    niggas get laid off, tryna keep it a secret
    niggas on the block making heavy chips
    this the hood, this is how we living
    shyt you come from the hood dont make you gangsta
    i aint a "g" but im far from a wanksta
    the shyt i been through, lord i thank ya
    nigga you got a crew thats pussy, how they gon save ya
    black on black crime is what we seeing the most
    and to white people thats like a toast
    now why we wanna give them something to laugh at
    lets give these crackers something to blast at
    most of yall rapping more tales than truth
    its so funny how ya fans believe you
    my thoughts evil when walking through HRP (Harlem River Projects)
    you aint gotta like but you gon respect me
    im realer than jewels on ya neck
    why talk guns if you aint carrying techs
    fiction stories gon get you where 2pac is (rip)
    i want big checks not minimum wages
    this a movie come take ya places
    most hypocrites go to church, praise Jesus (except my gandma)
    aint been there in years but im a believer
    cause what dont kill you only makes you stronger (mami strong)
    cats gon look at me with a different mind frame
    it dont take a genius to see that ive change
    material things dont mean shyt to me
    what did 8 years ago god took from me
    see what i speak is what the hood did to me
    but i love being here it was meant for me
    even though cats gon try to take ya dignity
    walk in my shoes that'll define Harlem's Queen (HQ)
    nobody taking my name its permanent (like a marker)
    the girl ride alone, dont need no click (fuk a crew)
    you wanna beef shortstop come see the chick
    you aint no "g" when you only popping ya lip (pussy ass niggas)

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    damn i thought u wasnt gon fix it oh well.

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    oh well they''ll get a double dosage
    lol............................................... ....................

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    can we get some feed?
    upping...........

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    Both of you sound like you have Really good ideas! You both sound like you know exactly what you want to say and have some good messages, like,

    "Niggas quick to scream "Money Over Bitches''.
    but i'm Independent ,Nigga I don't Need Ya Riches..."

    Fucken oath, I feel this man. Nice ideas, and

    "most hypocrites go to church, praise Jesus (except my gandma)
    aint been there in years but im a believer "

    Both of you got some nice ideas. All you gotta work on is choosing better words and getting more creative at bringing it across. I don't know what kinda Hip Hop you're into but if you Listen to people like Brother Ali, Mos Def, Kanye, You'll see how these type of ideas can be delivered in a real nice, smart and simple way. If not, stick around the boards and read other cats Open Mics, see what kids are up to and how you can up your game..

    You both sound like you got some good potential here. Stick around, Study up and Elevate.

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    nice shit man!...really nice work ladies keep it up ma's...shit hot nice flow and creativity was on point!. nice multies and emotion implamented! really good blending it wasnt blan it was str8 ghetto and ART!. nice execution i loved the effort and approach/Delivery that was a great asset!

    RTF on the OM in my sig called centered emotion and if ya didnt leave feed yeet please leave feed also on the OM called GONE.
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    Written Voices

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    This was good. I think ya'll both should work on multi's and structure. This wasn't an imagery piece so it was iight that it wasn't there. I liked this because I could relate to it in a way. keep at it to both of you. This was an overall good piece.

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    THis was a nice piece ,good punchlines
    flow was on point ....just work on structure
    and being more creative.......................8/10
    Battle needs Closing

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    ThaChampIsHere#1-vs-Roota


    OPEN MICS

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    my audio shit

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    thanks for checkin it out yall.

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    LadyDip can you leave feed on the OM Gettin Ready For War in mah sig please. appreciate it.

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    uppin this hot shit

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    All Around, Decent..

    Sounds Like It Would Have Been Better Suited
    For The Audio Realm.. You Ad-Libbed A Text
    Verse.. Work On Your Vocabulary And Structure,
    And I'm Sure You Will Continue To Shine..

    And it's funny ,how haters wanna see me Fail,,
    instead of me making money,they rather see me in Jail..
    locked behind bars, but hoe i would'nt let that happen..
    So keep On wishing,while my pockets continue to Fatten..

    I Really Felt This, Its So True..

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