The Fire

[~Vertikle~]

your a pussy who's 15 years old and probably never committed a crime in his life....someone get this guy a bib and some diapers pussy mothafucka.........set it up if your so sure......I can come hard or soft in a battle depends on how I feel but for you I'll bring it up a notch....don't fuck wit me ;+0

[-IsIs-]

ahahahah what does crimes have anything to do with anything you were talking about? all i said was take the constructive critism and dont bitch about it. look at my newest om. yea i lacked on it. cats told me about it. i listened and im goona elevate on the things they said. so just dont be a little bitch actin even younger then me. and for the battle..like i said. i dont battle no more. now peace. and forget about this one cause your newer one is better.

-Peace.

[~Vertikle~]

bitch

[K.Gee]

Good multies don't make a good song. The structure was off, sort of hard to follow, and you cant take any criticism. If they say u need work, take it into consideration. You can't skip the basics man, you gotta be in school before you teach people in one.

[ELEETE]

Wow this is a sad site to see, a cat that talks shit when he himself is no where near on the level as some here...Honestly dawg on your audio and your written verses what have you said that a million other rappers today havent? Not a damn thing you sound like another "im the shit your not" rapper...That shit is old and played only the stupid people too dumb to actually spare a constructive thought listen to garbage like that...Yo son before you go off poppin' off at the mouth i suggest you ELEVATE an prove your worth...

[Black Ninja]

hhmm this was not very good but it aint the shitest ive seen

work on WWELL EVERYTHING

[~Vertikle~]

peep my new shit ya'll, this was a keystyle I did ova the weekend while i was drunk......