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    Inside My Mind

    No matter what they say, I'mma rise to the top.
    Divide and then swap, run when it's hot, hide from a cop.
    Can't change my settings, so do I die is this plot.
    My mental capacity, has 2 be at a point where even I gotta stop.
    From all the tragidies that happened to me,
    I ask myself ova and ova, don't I deserve my own spot.
    Crazy as it seems, you can't relate to my dissapointment.
    Wonder if I could cure my passion, cause my words are the ointment.
    I didn't break into the house, I came up wit the sweetest plan.
    So why do I need a hand, In my mind I'm the king of this land.
    Saw the pigs and dropped all the shit in a blink and juss ran.
    Pussy bitches on RB ain't spreading the game, their shrinkin' it man.
    Even if I don't make it to be a star, in my mind I've been one.
    It's time for me to step, beat you bitches to the ground and win one.
    I've been due for a chance to shine, so you know I'm ready.
    It's like your packing a butter knife now, I'm packing a machete.
    Your crimes are petty, go back to dealing wit children.
    Why would ya go clubbin', when you'll be the ugliest person in the buildin'.
    If you wanna die, fuck wit me...............BITCH

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    man this was some good shit...nice multies and nice rhymes homie...
    flow was tight overall...topic was interesting...i liked this peice..
    good vocab usage in places...so overall i say diss is a 9/10..
    good drop man...keep it up..peace~

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    thanx
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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Vertikle~
    Why would ya go clubbin', when you'll be the ugliest person in the buildin'.


    *smirks* lol

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    lol hmmmmmm if you see on the page in my sig........females think I look good dumbass.......
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    lol!!

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    lol yep.......but wheres your pic at pussy bitch.......
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    youve elevated since the last piece i critiqued. keep doin what your doin. but listen to the top cats who price your shit. cause they can help you. overall i felt this piece was better and the flow was still a little off but its comin. the rhymes where a little simple in places but youve elevated there to. hmm..out of ten ill have to give you around a 7.5/10.
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    your mind smells

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    how does crime smell
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    yeah your words was a lil simple at times but i liked this
    piece it was decent , nice multies, flow was on point ..
    my advice to you would too be work on being a little more
    creative...and work on ya wordplay

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    sup Josh
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    uppin bitches reply and I'll reply
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    you did far batter here then the previous read i had of yours very kool g rap style add some punches and this would be straight flames never the less this was emprovement.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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