B.R.E Presents: "Siccnesssssssss"

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

uppin for tha piece

[your_end]

this was aight ppl... just wanna know, how come everyone (about 90% of this site) still rap like '95 i mean, ya'll should evolve alil more, construct a different flow, a new content and concept, ya'll still rap like, blah blah blah duff/gang gang gang duff/

too basic, not good in text, in audio its understandable, but not in text, peace

[Bashire]

^^^^^^^^da fuck , , he said tha collab was too basic, , , hahahah , hahahaha ,, , , , nigga didnt u see da vocabulary and wordplay , , so u want us too spit about hoes , discos ,and cars juss like u do , ,, nigga u a fuckin dumbass , ,, , I cant wait for other members to read wat this gay ass nigga said.......

[your_end]

no offense but have you spit infront of a crowd before? have you grabbed tha mic at all? im just wondering... man, as an emcee dont ever come at me like that, im doin' my thing you and ya crew doin' yours...

i came from another site, much different, it ain't tha way ya'll rap over here, in all honesty ya'll content, not wordplay ya content has been mastered in '95 thats what i was saying... you can make good wordplay in any content, which wasn't bad in ya'll verses...

and me rappin' 'bout hoes and cars and whatever? i can recall the hoes but cars? never that, fuck that, but anyways, why would i wanna rap about one topic over and over? im showing you my versatility i can rap about anything at any given time, anything you wanna hear, i can rap about... feel me? i dont even wanna beef wit chu, or nothing so im keepin' it real, i never said ya vocab was basic either

im full with rage, i want to punch a teacher out
she said i skipped class what lies out of her mouth

thats kinda basic ya feel me? no real complexity to it, no show of effort just rhyming words...

basically thats what ya'll did, just better...

you called me a gay-ass and a dumb ass... wow! thats some heat, we dont know eachother homie... im just stating what i felt, i aint gonna say somethings hot if i dont feel it is, and if something is hot, i'll say... you should just accept the real critique for what is it...

got me?... we coo'... peace

[Withersman]

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[Bashire]

Nigga u dumb dawg , , , , have u even seen all my threads ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, how can u say that i'm spittin about tha same thing over and over , , and u havent even seen all my threads , , and man u a fuckin disgrace dawg , ,, wat u said made no sense at all , ,so tell me if theres any other way of making things rhyme

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

yea Bash is right about that, i mean, its just freestylin,wit no basic topic ya know?

[your_end]

your getting worst...

first off i never even said you rhyme about the same thing over and over...

secondly... there are PLENTY PLENTY of ways to make ya shit rhyme... you can rhyme the first part of a line with the last part and tha last part of the second line... you can rhyme in multi? do you know what that is? well, i will teach you...

multies are rhyming more than one word in a series for instants...

tha example i gave above, thats not a multi syllable rhyme, why? because only the last sound of the last words rhyme...

but something like...

im ra-ging mad, spitting my bla-zing raps.... not how 3 syllables rhyme?

ra-bla
ging-zing
mad-rap

get it?... and i know you're going to 'clown' what i say takin' that it doesn make sense, and honestly, i do believe you haven't picked up a mic before... maybe only on this site, but no where else....

peace

[your_end]

and um, skiddlezz or however you spell it...

ugh.... sorry to break it to you, but you can't freestyle type, theres no possible way, you freestyling, catching what you're saying, and typing it at the same time, there's a concept called keystyling... thats quickly typing, the first thoughts that pop to ya head.. but thats it... peace

[Twenty6]

i thought it was well put together... nice job on the metas an multis but can i ask yall a ? in general...

WHY ARE MULTIS SOOO FUCKIN IMPORTANT.. just wondering

[InFiNiTe_22]

Originally posted by Twenty6
WHY ARE MULTIS SOOO FUCKIN IMPORTANT.. just wondering

.......^^^^^i dont kno how long youve been into rap.....but even someone who doesnt like rap knows dat.......dont ask stupid questions lik dat..........fuckin newbies.........

[Bashire]

labyrithn be easy dawg ,, twenty u need multies to make ur freestyle more complex

[Bashire]

Originally posted by your_end
your getting worst...

first off i never even said you rhyme about the same thing over and over...

secondly... there are PLENTY PLENTY of ways to make ya shit rhyme... you can rhyme the first part of a line with the last part and tha last part of the second line... you can rhyme in multi? do you know what that is? well, i will teach you...

multies are rhyming more than one word in a series for instants...

tha example i gave above, thats not a multi syllable rhyme, why? because only the last sound of the last words rhyme...

but something like...

im ra-ging mad, spitting my bla-zing raps.... not how 3 syllables rhyme?

ra-bla
ging-zing
mad-rap

get it?... and i know you're going to 'clown' what i say takin' that it doesn make sense, and honestly, i do believe you haven't picked up a mic before... maybe only on this site, but no where else....

peace

^^^Bitch i didnt see no multies in tha whack ass drop u did..............................Bitch how u gon say i didnt have no multies........................Man dis bitch is whack dawg.............Fuckin sound like a 11 year old tryin to rap,,,,,,,,,,,,,,U got tha most simplest lyrics I have ever ready