okay since u took so long to set it up...
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no d/r votes
no crew votes
no feeding
u spit first
okay since u took so long to set it up...
10 lines
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no feeding
u spit first
ill vote wen u drop!
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check o i forgot about this one
lol
ANtiquity got nuttin on me,heres 1 fact-is-i'm-bored
shudda stopped actin up way back like harrison-ford
and that aint a threat,i just like to say-the-truth
the wrong word ull have sh*t come thru painfully like a baby's-tooth/
dont test my rhymin skillz,n e fin but low-n-easy-f*cker
i'll leave ya on your ass like the eminem show-cd-cover/
head in your hands,and ya thoughts coz i'm mean-rockin-em'
going gainst me is pointless,like tryina see-oxygen/
i'm last of ma kind,so i guess i'm kind-of-the-last
disguising your fake thought's like i had your mind-ina-mask/
uppin for dudes verse
where you at
my bad i took so long no excuses tho lets go
leavin deep incisions in ya brain wit no intentions of stoppin
verbz burn u like alcohol to open wounds as ya body parts droppin
raisin ya blood pressure higher den gas bills...my barz sizzle
b*tch u aint explicit ya last song was played on the wiggles
plain n simple pump ya brakes i aint likin ya tone
i get u lifted like u lightin a bong the titan a don
u say u spit hot but u aint coppin a deal
the closet u come to XTC is poppin a pill
u beatin me nigga...a worthless sensation
imagine u lynched by ya intestines XTC's assassination
i lyked antiquity'z drop but i fought explicit came betta ee had betta structure punches betta verse!
v/ex
v/ ex
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harder punches with beter vocab and personals ... you both spit a good verse .. but ex took it with...
dont test my rhymin skillz,n e fin but low-n-easy-f*cker
i'll leave ya on your ass like the eminem show-cd-cover
.. v/ ex
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Explicit- ya verse was structured decent....Vocab coulda been better u really didnt have that much like dude said, but that doesnt matter....Wordplay couldve been better and some punches were weak like the eminem cd cover line....It really didnt hit hard enough, to do damage to ya opponent... Also, you need to work on having more personals as well, Your closure was the best part of your verse....
Antiquity- Better vocab, however ya structure seemed a lil stretched at times, anyway it was decent and it flowed ok.....Punches were decent and some areas were weak, the poppin pill line was played tho.....Wordplay was iight for the most part...Still there were parts in ya verse where you couldve came harder or re worded better.....However I feel as tho u took this battle....
v/Antiquity for an overall better verse
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thankz
uppin
hahaha, i vote XTC here for having the better verse in this battle i felt he was more consistent than his opponent had stronger lines more witty with his vocab, and was good with delivery other homie i feel you should work on being more direct with your punchlines towaRDS YOUR opponents when battling, be more consistent, and personal if you have to with your punchlines, keep at it pplz, ok battle pz
LINKS ON FRONT PAGE, honest feedback plz, NO ONE-LINERS, ty
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uppin
ex took the battle... his punches had more logic, made more sense, and hit harder
uppin ..my last one
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