I liked this piece a whole lot. I was actually picturing some of the parts in my mind. good work man. This piece was very good. I like the ending also. The multi's were there. overall a great piece. keep it up man.
I liked this piece a whole lot. I was actually picturing some of the parts in my mind. good work man. This piece was very good. I like the ending also. The multi's were there. overall a great piece. keep it up man.
Preciate it ma dog
Kiss me through the camera lens.TNL
this was very good, I've seen a lot from you, but I think that this was one of your best.I was feeling your imagery and your description in this peice was extremely good, you had me hooked from beginning to end which of course is a very important factor to have in an OM.You have a shit load of talent and I'm glad you have begun to write again,keep going and you'll soon have another OM HOF. Nice drop,keep writing.
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Revenge (part1)
it was a 15 min peice
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preciate the comments and yeah i'll check ya linkage now
Kiss me through the camera lens.TNL
tight shit
flow was decent but it woulda been better if you wouldve added some more 2 this but hot shit from what you have so far though when i saw the title i honestly thought i was about 2 see some ol' bullshit but you had some potential in this piece
preciate the comments
Kiss me through the camera lens.TNL
Damn This Was A Real Deep Piece, I Enjoyed Reading This Fo Real. I All'most Had A Tear In My Eye, Poor Lil Suzie Lol, Nah Bruv On A Serious Note You Oughta Try N' Up Ya Vocab A Lil, If You Had A Lil Stronger Vocab In This Piece It Would Of Been Str8 Up 10-10..but Damn, It Was Still Dope, Keep At It..
ImSignedHeHe Is Me, Thaz Why I Posted The Feed I Left Under This Alias, Jus Case You Were Wondering Holmez,
preciate the feed, na mean
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