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    10-sin stages- count down- the light

    10 asperity of initials, intersects emcees, intellects gets, fatally finalised/
    burning eyes, fire styles, man on the cross, life of a wild child//
    09 all aspects on occasion, all projected to location, change of oration/
    direction objective mind switch, psycho-LET, re-rent house vocation//
    08 step up stage, inhibitive hatred, head-AKE, neck BRake, frustration/
    world-of-wars, this is Total Annihilation, like spot light investigations//
    07 no-mo-moral, death plays cards, blood games start, sense mind failure/
    hail to ya, like frost bitten, I’l bring hale to ya, like a cross I’m nailing ya//
    06 next step, you swet, hot temps, like a boiler room, ya get gassed out/
    the dehydration, mind extirpation, time escalating, YOU hesitating
    05 room to move, but a box like closed rooms, paranoia ya mind will pack in/
    rabbiting on, crazed and nonsense, over kill thoughts, ya mind is overlap in//
    04 swet drears down ya face, eye lids tears blood, the pain is too unbearable/
    ya head shakes, this mind state, finding words to scream its terrible//
    03 un-in-control, ya body mind is drifting away from your soul/
    life not set out to do, still much youth, an so many goals it do//
    02 lye patronised, hated, left alone shamed and now out of date, Expired/
    torched to ashes, as thoughts drift away, job less, kelm, “fired”
    01 ya heart pumps the last circulation of blood, as your body starts to boil/
    your hair turns to dust, and your skin start to coil//
    00 death reaches you, now fly with open wings to the light/
    the last few seconds of life, was a war, of ya body staying alive//

    Ayo fam soon to be audio but holla what you all think pz

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...

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    Feed plz people

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...

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    Is anyone even going to feed me on this drop?

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...

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    Punisher that was actually pretty dope man, good 2 c a good topical head on GTA, the topic was original and very nicely thought out, you stayed on topic which is good, vocab was elevated, rhymes and multis were all there, good imagry and description, i liked the rhyme scheme and format... i'd advise you to change the font, make it smaller or something cuz i wasnt feelin the structure. the words were 2 big it made it kind of difficult 2 read and that effected the flow 2 me... but other than that nicely done and keep it up

    ~1~

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    Yeah Yeah Safe G

    I'l be putting this on audio soon anyway but yea thanx for the feed
    Just wanted to show my topical side of me, not just the raw battle
    style that I possess...

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...

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    haha lol im sure...

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    Che Che Uppin

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...

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    wack nothing to me
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    Comming from a person who's sign talks about camping sites?

    what ever, ayo can I get some propper feed plz uppin

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...

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