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Thread: My Truest Shit (violent)

  1. April 27th, 2006, 02:24 AM #1
    chitown_mex11
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    My Truest Shit (violent)

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...83#post4374783
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=289239

    This verse goez wit the beat of 2pac's song Violent, so listen to it if u havent already so u get the flow


    They wanna send mah race back over the border
    Employ us only to pay us five dollarz and a quarter
    So you claim i'm nothin but a dirty mexicano
    Well now you're fucked cuz i can be your worst rival
    No longer will i work in the back doing dishes
    Damn i'm sick of it so, i'm gonna act malicious
    I wasn't really detrimental
    But yet they never cease to blame me for the violence
    Eighteen yearz of this shit, so slugz flyin will undoubtedly commence
    They gonna get plugged in the temple
    Without a trace of evidence
    They claim we evil (gunshot) ha, bet they didn't know we also lethal
    (laughs) Bitch ass border patrol say wassup to my rifle
    I leave the american citizens in silence
    They awestruck by my rap'z eloquence
    We fed up wit runnin' and jumpin' over the fence
    So now it's arrived--the moment of truth
    They tryin' to apologize but it's too late
    The government has awaken a sleeping giant we prepared to bring the hate
    War seemz evident so ima have to behave...violent
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  2. April 27th, 2006, 05:51 AM #2
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  3. April 27th, 2006, 02:18 PM #3
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  4. April 27th, 2006, 02:21 PM #4
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    nice.......................but damn son..do you understand the word structure your sopittin here????i can.can oyu.....nice peice though.lol.on the real.just stressin ya.p--e-a-c-e-

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  5. April 27th, 2006, 02:23 PM #5
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    Your 3 bar lines dont parry up, as your lines are too streached

    It was alright but I just found it a bore to read to be truthful...

    In time you shall improve though... props

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    My tongue tackled many men with my skill
    Who'd of thought my tongue was ready to kill
    You better lay still- its hunting a meal
    Leaving bodys in ice rack its it nature to chill
    Leaving you top E "so maybe" ya'l die by ta pill
    So many victums the piles got as big as a hill
    ...Punisher...
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  6. April 27th, 2006, 09:57 PM #6
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  7. April 28th, 2006, 11:29 AM #7
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    i liked it... the flow was ok and the structure was also.. u coulda used more emotion and imagery...and the vocab was decent... but good drop tho keep em coming.. 1
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  8. April 28th, 2006, 10:03 PM #8
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  9. May 3rd, 2006, 10:43 PM #9
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    omg this is why im gonna sound like a rascist fuckin asshole but i fuckin hate how u fuckin mexicans go around waving your mexican flags and saying how much you wanna be in america......heres something for u.......wave a fuckin american flag....if your so valuable to the u s do somethng productive shut the fuck up, and dont be fuckin illegal...u realize we dont have a problem with anyone else....why....cus their legal....fuckin idiot
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  10. May 3rd, 2006, 10:46 PM #10
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    oh.......and ur a fuckin idiot for thinking mexico can win in a war.....good luck with that...what u gonna do....cover us in grass from ur lawn mowers....or throw strawberrys at us....oh no...we should just nuke u stupid fuckers
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  11. May 4th, 2006, 12:10 AM #11
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    lmao stupid ignorant little kid...i was born here fool...fuckin little kids
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  12. May 4th, 2006, 12:16 AM #12
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    delivery and structure need work but text content was ill i liked this i have beat and stretched lines problem also it all actually depends on how you spit so audio might amplify this to more.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  13. May 4th, 2006, 01:41 AM #13
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    pretty good dude. not that bad. as one who has heard the song before, this wasn't that bad as it followed through. some of the was u set that shit up could be better, and delivery as well as structure. but yea, the message is ill and would be cool to hear behind the beat.

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