I feel u though...good drop once again.
I feel u though...good drop once again.
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I thought the best thing about this was the depth and imaginative writing that you used. The emotions seemed to ooze off the screen when I was reading it and the word usage kept me interested. The parts I thought that needed to be touched up on is the structure and the rhyme scheme could use a little work as well. But over all it is a very moving piece and I'm glad I took the time to read it through. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Return the Favor
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Battles that need Closure
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