The World As I See It

[Proefficient]

~SMOKEY~
America Is Under A War That's Madly Hurtin Mass Missions.
Fightin An Easy Battle To Fund Halliburton Tacticians.
Soldiers Killin For Freedom But They Gone To Spend A Pawn.
Cause It's A Known Fact There Was A Bomb In The Pentagon.
And No Plane,Call That Mass Population Mind Control
Playin With Toxines,When It Passes Saturation Ya Spine Is Cold.
Secret Areas Having Contact With Metaphysic Apparitions.
Havin Plans For New World Order On A Metadiscus Composition.
Don't Believe Me?I Call You Skeptic,But When I Recall This Next Shit.
You'll Have No Choice But To Believe America Is The Nexus.
To Demonic Spirits Hidden In Well Known Masonic Clinics.
Cause We All Gettin Fucked Bad Like Platonic Spirits.
Invading Irak,All They Did Was Win Some Side Banger.
Bush Is A Puppet,He's Just The Iris In The One Eyed
Armed With Cannons Powerful Enough To Leave A Danger.Baller Smoked.
Remember This Shit All Started From Lies Inserted On A Dollar Quote.

Saint Jerzey
Yo u already Kno, Its All about the nation
total control, Complete Domintion
All Ya haters fall the fuck back
we all G's, we all scraped, holding lyrical gats
Jerzey has other states lookin more pussy then cats
ya all one time lyrical hits,
i aint a blood, aint a crip, nation ryda, loaded clip
Dont Leave The Block Matter Fact Jerzey wit out my glock
Houston Texas all my Kin Folk, me n smokey go back like ClockWork
You should Kno how Jerzey Roll
Wont pay a dime, juss silly faggot my dick aint for hoes, stop wasting my time
I rather Fuck and Nut on a Church Girl
marry me a Jerzey rich one, she buys me diamond pearls
dont fuck wit the Nation Cuz I WILL CHANGE UR WORLD!!

Lyrix
yo, life jus got me sick like i ate nasty food//
niggaz be like im buggin but im in a crapy mood//
seein cats behind bars,shit..... nuttin to eat//
not all goes to jail cuz there's stilll people buckin they heat//
a corrupted world wit lil kids who got nuttin but a dream//
no matta wuh me n my people gon keep flowin like a stream//
plus im tired of this racist bull shit n stuff//
like i wont empty a full clip on who eva thinkin they tuff//
check it, tha lil cats thinkin life is bout big cars n ice//
n hummers wit big wheels plus a garage wit bikes//
well listen it aint..... cuz itz hard but nice//
you jus gotta open yah eyes wide reveal to yah-self wutz hidden//
like about illuminati tha truth is forbidden//
wun thing i can tell u right now is that that shit'll neva be written//

KillenDemsoftly
da crews flow is highly contagious,droppin bars like prison escapists,
Lately...I've seen so many wack cats who WISH they
could contain this,

LETS GET SERIOUS........

I'm gettin' my cred cool, and spittin' in threads cruel
Educated sickness, like I be spittin' in Med School
Til' heavy hoarse on my tongue like I'm lickin' a dead mule
Spray to spar, bitches playfully bitchin' done bled pools
Poppin' tops to get 'em lifted like sippin' a Red Bull
Coppin' ratchets...and Ion't be shippin' the Fed tools...
The pump got me gassed like a whip when it's feuls full
I'm grippin' the peg, fool, and gettin' my leads pulled...
in hittin you wit "clean thread" call it a "virgin wool"
im da secound sign of da zodiac, the sun call me taurus, the bull

DRzMosNotorious
Look homies sum people out here aint shit but spare change in my pocket/
I rememba tha old days like wen we lit up rockets/
Pollution is wats killin some of the animals that live/
like tha stuff we drive,killin the earth,soon its goin 2 b harder 2 survive/
Std's are goin around,like tha mary go round/
but people won't realize till the world iz left without sound/
Some people r crazy n blow there head off like hitler did/
Or get wounded n dont care az long as they killed tha otha kid/
But what's tha world comin 2,prositutes,gunz,and sex,what's goin 2 happen next?/
chillin in tha projects commitin 187,what ever happen to Malcom X/
This is a ruthless world,so i pray askin god for help/
Bcuz all tha stupid shit I've done is sins he has 2 dealt/


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[J.J]

very nice, the rhymes could have been a BIT better but this was still pretty dope. If anyone hates on this piece they needa get off the site cuz they have no taste in rap at all. the flow was nice, structure could have been a bit better also but oh well..i can see why you did the different colors to seperate each persons' verses apart from eachother, otherwise i wouldnt have liked it. overall this was a very good piece man keep doin ya thing

[Proefficient]

thanx for the feed,uppin for more feed

[Twixn...]

not bad here.. you all came at it with your own styles... some of them where pretty basic... but you had some devent parts here... alroghout you might not always wokrk together... whenever theres that many people its usually the case... but nice work here..i ghought you guy brought this all together well here.... meh... not bad for effort...

drop links... you need 2 or it will be closed...

peep my latest.

[Atti]

Eh, piece was kind of lame in my opinion. The majority of the writers had such rediculously basic vocab, flow, rhymes, just everything. I mean, I read Smokey's first of course cuz it was first and it was actually pretty good even though I felt like he may not even know what he's talking about and was just kind of using big words for the sake of using them... But after that the drop got worse with each verse. Also, no one's verses really flowed into eachother at all. You've got Smokey levels ahead of everyone else, and then everyone else had completely contrasting styles... Besides the whole everyone starting their verses with "Yo," I dont know... It started intellectual and kind of thought provoking and then went into this gangstah bull shit and now all of a sudden we go from talking about "nations under fire" to "niggaz be grabin' gatz" and shit like that. I just didn't like this drop at all. I can tell that everyone just did their parts seperately and someone just slapped everything together in the end. Just overall it was just weak. Sorry guys, better luck next time.

I'd apreciate it if you could leave feedback on my new Om:
"When the Elephant Walks..."
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287748

[Proefficient]

links r under all the verses in hyperlinks,and this is a old drop that got closed because we didnt have enough feed so if any thing every body elevated wen it comes to poems or w.e,but its not my style n e way,uppin for feed

[Smokey.]

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[Dirty D]

Cause It's A Known Fact There Was A Bomb In The Pentagon.

i liked that cuz i havent heard that one before..
you gotta pretty good scope on things how they really work but you sound almost to preachy..just my opinion


the second cat was madd simple and didnt really say anything new to me at all

3rd cat was sick wit some of the multies but you wasnt on topic hardly at all...but the verse was prolly my favorite one

and the last dude just read tha shit for the second nigga

[Proefficient]

^^i dont get that last part,but n e ways,uppin for more feed

[Smokey.]

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[Smokey.]

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[KalmKidd]

very nice drop all u where on point could of bene put togethe ra little stronger but all and all good drop

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