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    Word Wide Feat.K-5-0

    Def Angel
    The letters DL.. are symbols that represent gods
    lord knows it was mistake.. but an exellent cause
    flying high, nah.. fuck that we float, cant handle flight-
    we light up rooms.. the size of egypt, with a candlelight
    K-5-0 got me on tha right foot, for that im thankful
    leave MC's dangled, times they say we to much to handle-
    See, with the knowledge spread round each ill head
    lays a carpet full of DOGs bleached red,and a speech not said-
    theres no control round tha world, yu couldn't put a hand on this
    even if we were strapped up in Africa covered in bandages
    were on the verge of the take ova, like a blocked eclipse
    ready to turn the world to darkness, hell risen, its the apocalypse
    K-5-0
    Ayo..
    From L.A. to England... ya know we got it locked down
    so now..Divine Lyrisists spans the whole globe around-
    We bring this illness.. like no ones ever broughten
    wit lyrics as intricate as the gang zones in compton-
    clownin most often, but we get deeper than bass tones
    worldwidely recognized like a pac bell pay phone
    try to touch us when you got me and Def Angel in the zone..
    and right before your eye's you get to witness this
    spit with skills as limit-less, as a mills productive intrest is-
    is y i write with vigalence, everytime the mic is visited..
    so step wit your wasted raps, and get your bars smashed
    quicker than the witness, said diana's car crashed-
    provoke me.. or this click..your next spit might be your last
    cause now you can't run from us..in every country we'll beat your ass...
    WORLDWIDE

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    def- i really wasnt fellin your verse cause i felt thrown off at times. but your strucutre was good, and wordplay was great. but i dont feel like you sticked to the topic. keep elevating. peace
    k-5-0-meh, i wont feeling your verse much either. i felt thrown off by yours too. your strucutre was ok, your wordplay wasnt good though. because some of the lines didnt rhyme. oversll, this was an ok piece. peace.

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    this had sum good structure and flow.. and sum decent wordplays.. just the concept and content could of been more expressive in what ever terms...

    ya'll also displayed sum good rhyming skills
    so yeah was a decent easy to follow piece tho could of had some added deepnes and complexities....



    pz1
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    I didn't like this in the least bit. Alot of things you said didn't make sense like where you said you light up egypt with a candle light or some shit... Regardless of how good of emcees you could ever be, that would never happen, and it's not like that was clever wordplay or anything. I don't know, for rep tracks I really have to be wowed with creativity and such to be impressed, and this entire track was just kind of open hand punches and re-worded disses from times before. *Shrug* I dunno, I'm just more of a fan of deeper works really... Stay up and keep writing though.

    I'd apreciate it if you could return the favor:
    "L.A. Reed Bought my Soul"
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287417

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    I liked this..topic was aight....this was overall a good peice
    ya guyz rhymes were really good, same with da multies.....
    flow was real smooth, made it easy and more enjoyable to read..
    complexity,vocab, and imagery was pretty nice could have been better
    overall this was a good read..keep it up guyz..peace~

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