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Thread: Mid-Life

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    Mid-Life

    Mid-Life


    Manifest and ingest the best value i contributed to a dying breed
    plant a seed in the soils of genes and Caresse the mess to good deed
    false literature fed, does not seem to have the value or subtle effect
    erect a problem then coax it down with inherited debt

    how are we set?

    our country starved for unmoral action attacking addicts
    meth and coke head minds, easily warped into drug induced magic
    impossible to eradicate tactics aimed to seeking out the soul
    control is the devil dance with strings n a puppets black hole
    sure where ready to evolve... we can't even handle our own brains
    the air we breathe can barely seem to keep us sustained
    red, white and black blood mixed now officials are ticked
    hate crimes turn to killer with intent Diabolically ravaged and clicked
    the savages of the street mentality tear away life, feel the drama and strife
    plenty of hopes n' dreams ended by the knife, masquerading emotion
    the notion of a beast un kept, no one to fix the solution, just adds contribution
    the chaos of destroying our own human, nature, skin color bias
    they try like the rest to infest crawling into young heads inside us

    i watch as my children age...
    the new age... an era begins
    win this day with me... and put away sin
    it has been a long road,
    still my midlife crisis years away
    my heart can not yet readily carry that load
    so pay no attention to my words... i feel them not
    but pass them as a whisper and passing thought


    Again i hide away my past and seek to change the wind blow future
    the likes of a teacher who sat beside me on a the bleachers
    is still not found among these preachers...
    so if this makes no sense... my future is senseless venting
    anger... confusion mixed into memories worth something


    we are a part od this planet... weather or not we demand it so make sure
    not to....
    poison the air and nature... it governs our souls intent and stature
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    Last edited by Twixn...; April 20th, 2006 at 06:31 AM
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    Interesting piece.........

    Very intense in a rather abstract manner. Somewhat political and introspective....but more so ventful than anything else. You have a real gift with words, I can apperciate how you craft and shift your language and make it seem almost efforteless. Anyways I won't pretend to know exactly what the hell it is that your talking about in this piece, but I will say this.....whatever it is your getting at was most def worth a read.

    favorite lines:
    sure where ready to evolve... we can't even handle our own brains
    the air we breathe can barely seem to keep us sustained
    red, white and black blood mixed now officials are ticked
    hate crimes turn to killer with intent Diabolically ravaged and clicked

    ^Your rhyme scheme was indeed strange, but your content was worth a notice.

    All in all......nice job!

    stay up!

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    WOW!... This is really getting slept on. To be honest, around the time I came into Po' I checked out some of your work and jsut thought it was ok, but then I went farther bak and saw your older stuff was pretty intense. It seems like recently you've been really getting back into your writing and making some very dope works. Everything about this piece I jsut really loved. The structure seemed long at first but the lines flowed so fluently that it really didn't matter. Topic wasn't anything new, but the approach was original so the fact I've seen it before really didn't bother me. So, great piece overall... Gotta check the date real quick, if this is from April I'll drop it an HOF nod.

    I'd apreciate it if you could return the favor:
    "L.A. Reed Bought my Soul"
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287417

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    this was a really good peice,it was well worth a read....the description and detail in this was very good,the imagery you created was fantastic.you really have a very unique style of writing, unlike anything I have seen before and I must say I really enjoy reading it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Witness.
    ummm hello?

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