THE MASSACRE FT. SMOKEY.SILENT_KILLA911.SIN~A~MATIC & LIL J.C{FEEDBACK PLZ!!!}

[Dark_Shadow]

{Intro}
haha...man its funny
Mr.Ballon Head..Where U At..
haha..Die Slow Muthafucka
Less Go The Massacre....

{Dark_Shadow}
brown pride can suck my dick & im Hispanic
Mr.Ballon Head when ur ass see me, u betta panic
im the King of the streets im the Realest there is
who are you? damn why didnt ur mom tell me she had a kid?
this right here is juss a taste if u keep fukkin around u gunna get hit hard
ur head so big ur moms pussy was extended 3 times, ur head bigger then lard
wit my pistol in ur mouth tears comin down ur eyes asking "oh so what was u saying"
u shit ur pants & studder out "nah im sorry plz dont kill me i was juss playing"
"i thought u was Mr.Ballon Head now excuse me ur mom iz waitin on my bed"
next time u talk shit imma finish the job, stand Up *Boom* haha bullet shot to ur leg

{Smokey}
hitten you over the head with bars, receiving a lyrical beating
kid spits like a deaf guy speaking, why you even bother competing?
You never accepted my challenges too scared cause all you like doing is sucking cock
Trying to lead the "Next Generation" you couldn't b a "Star" on a "Track"(trek) if you was related to "Spoc
Border Patrol couldnt catch you but i bet i will
Aiming at you with tha infahred homies ready to shoot and kill


{Silent_Killa911}
It was crazy when i heard u were alive after i drilled you
And its funny how u went "Jeppers Creepers" and got bak up when i thought i killed you
No wonder why everybody on this site hate you more then stank ass
Cuz ur nasty, most woman u with tell they own self, "Oh....I'll pass"
Let me get my kitten to harm you worst then u know it
Ya dumb? U got a boat...but u dont know how to row it

{Sin~A~Matic}
Destroyin fuckers in my spare time my rec never been stain
I'll keep prayin and hopin to the mods that they'll ban certain lames
niggaz who think they they shit and spit hot garbage
And get beat 5-0 against me cuz i'm always making carnage
A nigga with aliases out the ass like he shittin e mail addresses
and can't hold up any beef so i leave the nebs to clean up the messes
Have the silly niggaz wearin dresses like they lost a bet
and make a shit load of whack crews lame gangs, and gay sets
Buried under ground no sound no heart say five holy mary's and keep askin her
How u got caught in this Om and get caught in the fuckin massacre

{Lil J.C.}
im tired of all dis bitch talkin all dis mad shit, thankin dat he sick
i cud tear him limb from limb, knock him out wit 1 swing of my dick
talkin hard like he a real OG's, well i tell him 2 come 2 my hood, c me
show him wat a real nigga look like, have him beggin on his knees fo mercy
but i show nun, call me god, ill smite dis bitch nigga where he stand
i got his world n my palm, simply destroy it by clinchin my hand

{Outro}
hahahahahahahahaha
i told u nigga..dont fuck wit us...
My people are ready to bomb on you
InFahRed Nigga haha...Round 1...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287776
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287028

[Proefficient]

iight iight,tha content of this waz good i was feelin tha word of massacre lolz,tha flow in the verses were good,tha vocabulary wasnt that bad but not to strong,and the verses were good they wasn't a lot of punches n stuff,well my overall enjoyment was good,i liked readin all the verses,G/L on round 2 since i this is round 1

[Dark_Shadow]

less get sum feedback plz

[Witty]

this was quite good...it had some nice rhymes..I was liking silent Killa's the most because even though it was short it still made an impact,the whole drop was quite good,although you all could have made the vocab a lot better..the structre was quite good,but you may have to change the title because this will probably get closed. but all in all nice drop...keep at it,

[Lil J.C.]

mo feed ppl plz wud b appreciated

[Witty]

return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287859

[White Dice]

This shit was real good. i was feelin Sin and Silents verse the most. Dark yo verse good also couldda had more punchlines but ok. Smokey urs was meh.....syke not it was aight. JC ur was good but u couldda used more punchlines. but good job yall.

[Smoka Joka]

lol at this it was weak beyond believe nothing was good the best diss at chicho was the baloon head thing but serious weak attempt flow was really off very weak atttempt waits for a comeback from chicho

[~ChIChO~]

shit i feel importnant niggas dissing me. lol u know imma get ya'll bitches

[Leonidas]

this Was weak...You all coulda came harder against chicho, and why didnt u let me in on this?? I woulda came and dropped a verse...All of you need to get more personals on him, harder punches, and way better flow

[Dark_Shadow]

yea but Remeber this only Rd.1 my niggas We coming Harder Next Time n wit more People

The Massacre Part 2.
Coming In 2 Days...

[Lil J.C.]

word 2 dat

[~ChIChO~]

lol and wit more people lol coolie kid. its only more ppl i gotta diss

[Lil J.C.]

go ahead n diss me fact is u scared of smokey scared 2 battle him u wantin 2 do a GFX battle lmao lame bro u n ova yo head wetback bitch

[~ChIChO~]

thimk dat kid