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    lyrical messiah
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    The Wraith

    aight ya'll i was watchin this move called the wraith an it inspired me to make this song. i've recorded it an it sounds pretty good. so if you would check this out an let me know what you think.


    hook

    i'm the wraith, yeah somethin like Charlie Sheen
    lyrically rape, you an every member in ya team
    gone get scraped, off the road for fuckin wit me
    cause i'm the wraith, forget it you can't compete wit me

    verse 1

    some say that i kill, but i call it revenge
    i just keep it real, ain't no need to pretend
    ghostly figures visit me, at night in my dreams
    it tells me spit it b, an ya rivals will scream
    they gonna regrett, every thang they did
    demandin respect, cause it go to the kid
    this ain't no hospital, i ain't got the patience
    lyrics get skribbled, cause time is just wastin
    God don't promise it, lyircs so damn dominant
    they ain't no stoppin it, cause i keep hip-hoppin em
    you drink hydraulic fluid, just to get high
    you hard bitch prove it, i'll be here all night
    you an ya crew, like skank an gutter boy
    listen to me dude, don't st..st..stutter boy
    ya lyrics just reek, thinkin you hard but you weak
    but i got my whole fleet, knock ya ass to next week
    jump on you, like a rat on a cheeto
    lyrically kill you, like eminem did benzino
    lyrical bullshit, thats what you spit
    lyrical cool shit, thats what my fans get
    i'm comin for you bitch, watch ya fuckin back
    ya wig gettin split, by my baseball bat
    an that's a fact, bitch you just wack


    hook

    i'm the wraith, yeah somethin like Charlie Sheen
    lyrically rape, you an every member in ya team
    gone get scraped, off the road for fuckin wit me
    cause i'm the wraith, forget it you can't compete wit me

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    this my boo.......guess who it is

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    lyrical messiah
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    Last edited by big j da fat boy; April 17th, 2006 at 02:30 AM

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    lyrical messiah
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    Question

    I think it started out strong and got slightly more timid as I read on. Like you almost started talking shit to someone who wasn't there.....You had a nice concept from your inspiration source, but you kinda drifted off on metaphorical nonsense in the end. All in all I liked it for the fact that it flowed with a simple nursery rhyme rythem. You had some nice vocab in there and some dope lines....Oh yea...LmaO @ Rat on a cheeto. ! !

    Good shit hOmiE
    ~1~

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    hav'nt ya heard?
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    dope song /......................nice nice nic eflo.......i was liking it...............the last 2-4 lines of yo verse killed it though......you gotta give the hardest line there..lik they wont forget hearing that line cause its so deep and skillful, it summarizes the whole song.........in 2-4 line....................or if ya got the talent...which you may..................1 line./............overall very good peice...................p-e-a-c-e.no-hate.................

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