How much do i suck?

[Nguyen]

Never let an old bitch grit while you're trying to illustrate
Throws off concentration, gives you constapation with organ displacation
Give a million for surgery and purge poor people for the funding
Encourage little kids in learing inappropriate adjectives
Its only good for them like setting fire to a gopher dam
My sick mind wont lemme sleep so i see lemons in my sleeves
Mental instituion, are you there? I tried to give my self dental implants
But ended up blowing open my friend joe so i planned to go to mexico
Enough said just give them back the hostage and escape in boxes

[VooDoo]

You barely rhymed in some parts........lol

[hYpoConDrAddict]

lol yeah make it rhyme or smoething

[Technique]

the question was ''how much do i suck'' the answer

























ALOT

[Witty]

read the rules dude.

[ExDaGawd]

LOL yea fam, This wasnt good at all. You have alot of elevating to do: Only thing you got going for yourself right now is a decent structure and ok vocab at some parts wich is a good start. Just gotta take it from the and prosper. And most the time you just babbled for instance:

My sick mind wont lemme sleep so i see lemons in my sleeves

LMAO wdf? That doesnt make sense, Unless you got a trick up your sleve or something. lol. Like I said before just elevating and work on the areas you arent good at. Keep dropping tho its the only way to get better.

[big j da fat boy]

aight ya'll Andy Millanokis found rap battles........but on the dawg you need to elevate alot just go to the cypher an do those threads it tells you what to do an explains how to do it. in a while of doin that you should get better. peace out

[B.I.Detained.]

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I HAVE TO HARSH ON YOU ALL NOW.
READ THE RULES.
CLOSED.

Reason: You're thick.

-Brix.