not my first drop ever but first to a rap forum, not my best shit, mostly ventin, gimme some feedback
Man i swear somethins wrong internally
I feel like everyones tryin to earn-on-me
either that or kick dirt-on-me
I dont even 'trust' this world cuz itll 'turn-on-me'
I could try to change-the-reel
it wont change-the-deals, made by entertainment,-still
tradin marketability in exchange-for-skills,
it doesnt fade me still
I remain on point wit a nash-first-step
I gotta nack-for-death
attack while u still gasp for breath
cuz im tired of these cats sayin they gonna flash-techs
then the beef start and they 'bounce' like bad-checks
so without further adue-time
let me introduce-my, Italian tapdance
ya whole crew get shoe-shined
you kids are better off pickin out some casket-carpet
I scar quick, slice ya throat wit a slash-guitar-pick
and fuck a drive-by, my gats-get-car-sick.
alright lemme get some feedback.