Good flow, but ya structure coulda been better. The piece was good and told well,and had great emotion. The topic was confusing as to what direction you were heading within this piece. Vocab was good and you took advantage of it and thats what I like about pieces. Good job.
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View this from last year^
Closed. Pull a stunt like this again and you're on the warning list.
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