SMOG vs ILLTECHNIQUE

[ILLTECHNIQUE]

10-12lines
house rules
5mins to check
1 hour to drop
blind spit

[SMOG]

iight....damn duke you was quick to set this shit up.......wanted to catch me before i bailed out.........

lol...checkin in...........

[ILLTECHNIQUE]

check.................

[SMOG]

Yo SMOG's what defines Illness,RB's just allowin me to rip cats..
while your slobberin on a porkchop to see if you can spit phat...
Your teqniques aint hot and your flames aint half as tight.........
But just wait dawg,, your time is near.....lol....afterlife....
Yo see, I write rhymes to enlight minds,and you,well damn son your wack.
only time you shine is when your greesy heads under a lamp on a rack.
Just give up now, your just as sorry as an apology..
And thats not only my opionion, I speak for all emcees..
they all agree that your bars are weak like a melted babyruth..
Happy you lost this battle rememberin tha only time you felt a ladys boob..
yo your punchlines are soft like a fight between two dames..
and your rhymes are so played Regular NES mad some new games....

[ILLTECHNIQUE]

smog ill battle u since u have sum wins to ya name
but having more loses than wins just a fuckin shame
im coming at ya wit my gun drawn but im crackin ya frame
leave ya ass knocked out and ya whole rep getting no fame
Ill have ya hanging from ya ceilin fan watch ya body turn in circles
I’d be getting dizzy watchin ya spin around then c ya face turn purple
your tipsy like a crowded boat, better off casting votes
you couldn't spit text if i shoved a keyboard down ya throat
If ya ever bought tha heat ya prolly be shootin blanks
so i wont waste my bullets ill just pull out my shank
son, i display a tech to put a cave in ya chest
you'll be shot to death, now your laid to rest

[ILLTECHNIQUE]

uppin for sum votes

[grim.reap]

ill deffinetly took this one with better punches flow structure and overall a better verse.

[brevan]

your tipsy like a crowded boat, better off casting votes
you couldn't spit text if i shoved a keyboard down ya throat

son, i display a tech to put a cave in ya chest

vs.

Yo SMOG's what defines Illness,RB's just allowin me to rip cats..
while your slobberin on a porkchop to see if you can spit phat...

But just wait dawg,, your time is near.....lol....afterlife.... --- lol i liked

hmmm i dunno id prolly go with SMOG he had more of the less weak of the weak punches and some of the better fillers i thought. close though
(cant officially vote... just opinions)

[da shit]

I’d be getting dizzy watchin ya spin around then c ya face turn purple
your tipsy like a crowded boat, better off casting votes
you couldn't spit text if i shoved a keyboard down ya throat
If ya ever bought tha heat ya prolly be shootin blanks

vs. nottin terific uv spit better b4

v// ill

no hate

[FlowzLuCiouS]

Vote - Ill

i was feelin his verse, both had good structure, ez to folow both flows...but ill deff came harder in dis 1!!..better punches flow n sum lines made me read dem twice!

Smog...deff did good tho ill did not shit on him ppl!!...keep it upm ive deff seen old battles u are gettin better now, way to get ya game up!!...but now keep it up!

but overall Ill will get my vote for a better verse overall!!

[Mr.Cyrus]

v/ill for better flow and had better punches well i liked dem and he had an aight opener other due had get punches but not gd enought 2 win.

[Blue Gunz]

your tipsy like a crowded boat, better off casting votes
you couldn't spit text if i shoved a keyboard down ya throat

son, i display a tech to put a cave in ya chest

vs.

Yo SMOG's what defines Illness,RB's just allowin me to rip cats..
while your slobberin on a porkchop to see if you can spit phat...

But just wait dawg,, your time is near.....lol....afterlife.... alriight

hmmm i dunno id prolly go with SMOG he had more of the less weak of the weak punches and some of the better fillers i thought. close though

both need to be much more creative..

V//ILL