The End

[X-TA-C]

Come in to the dark/
Running from the man/
For every god damn fan/
Go after them too/
Ever since the bullets flew/

Been on the underground Perfecting my rhyme/
Even though no one asked I've been fine/
Now I'm back taking what's mine/
Maybe I'll stay a while, and rip up your lines/
Go for the top niggaz, stay away from that bitch Stryk9/

Raised in a brutal era/
Never knowing where the rent comin from/
Runnin' this street cred, always carry my gat,
If I see a fagget ass nigger on the street,Right off the bat/

And you know I don't even care/
When we go, we'll see how you fare/
Bet you don't even care/
I resort to violence/
Your gangstaz move behind us/
Like you don't know what we trying/
That's how we go,That's how we roll/
And you didn't even know

[LyricallyInclined]

are you serious okay anyway this is my break down:
you flow was terrible it just wasnt there, the title didnt go well with the actual peice, your structer was the only good thing about this, i didnt like it one you where using racial slurs and two because it was shitty and thats on a real note no one here would congradulate you for this they would dog you out for even posting it you need to elevate bad

[B.I.Detained.]

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-Brix.