Alright guys I just finished this up today and posted it on another forums, but nobody gives me any feedback but this site looks much better so here it goes.
He was just a kid, and he had just left his teens/
He had to take apart the bishop and go straight for the queen/
Because the feind in his mind ate away at his dreams/
It consumed the kids soul until he suffered to breath/
His mind replayed the scene down deep in his head/
The queen so peaceful laying dead on the bed/
There were forces beyond men that took control of his life/
It turned him dark when he used to be a heavenly white/
He was taken over, done quite easily/
The darkness so thick, he struggled with it to see/
His mind took over his life, his one sick fanasy/
So when it was dark he left, to go meet his queen/
The forces unseen know feelings haven't felt yet/
they hold the thick woven strings, while we're the marionette/
Life is already corrupted by material things/
You know yourself, but do you know who's really pulling your strings?/
So he walked with the darkness, his only true friend/
Adding darkness to his colour, making deepining blend/
No turning back now, he had gotten too deep/
The darkness had leveled, he had gotten past steep/
So as he walked with darkness it erased memories/
It smothered out his minds voice, rest to pleads/
the darkness was the shepard, he was following sheep/
He didn't know the role played by the forces unseen/
He had left his pedistle that once placed him tall/
Always drivin by the voice that seemed to beckon and call/
He had crossed past the lights edge and took the cliffs fall/
It was all for one, but had it been this one for the all?/
The forces unseen know feelings haven't felt yet/
They hold the thick woven strings, while we're the marionette/
Life is already corrupted by material things/
You know yourself, but do you know who's really pulling your strings?/
He had walked throughout the night without any sound
He never held his head up, always staring at the ground/
Because the darkness clings, always pulling you down/
Pulling cornors of mouths making sorrow filled frowns/
He reached her street only him and the moon/
Walked across the lawn and looked into her bedroom/
And there she was, as beautiful as can be/
Her radiance was stunning, flowing out from his queen/
He stood there a moment leting it all seep in/
He was safe with the darkness now, it washed away sin/
So he tried the front door and forced himself through/
The darkness the false pathway, but his love was the true/
They've been controlling our families, it's been done for years/
Cause of the pain, and suffering and the infinite tears/
When you are dying you know it, the darkening nears/
We are only lifeless dolls, and they're just puppeteers/
Sillouetes of the darkness danced on the walls/
He was quiet, no disturbance as he walked through the hall/
As he came to a door, which was placed on his left/
He noticed that the light eminating was the strongest/
He wondered who it was but he already knew/
He was gone now, because inside darkness still grew/
His head was a void now, one thing on his mind/
that was the death of the radiant, and this was the time/
God was in the room, he could feel the Lords faith/
His actions could do nothing now, because the light was too late/
Because the darkness has a power, and it can surpass/
When it gets you the feeling is one that will last/
They've been controlling our families, it's been done for years/
Cause of the pain, and suffering and the infinite tears/
When you are dying you know it, the darkening nears/
We are only lifeless dolls, and they're just puppeteers/
He stepped up to the queen, she was in pure bliss/
He bent over her and gave the last and final kiss/
He always trusted the darkness, but it had always lied/
If pulled you in and suffocated you and watched as you died/
He had to do the same for her, show her how darkness felt/
So he grabbed one of the pillows and beside her he knelt/
He placed it over her head and pushed down with light force/
She awoke and scremed but it was muffled behind closed doors/
She clawed his face bringing blood but he felt no pain/
Because the darkness brought that feeling, it was exactly the same/
Her heavenly white now wavered and started to dim/
He was not in control anymore, now it was the puppeters string/
He remembered a childhood lullaby, so he started to sing/
He had finally found the new queen fit for this king/
You think that you got everything under control/
But there are shades of grey starting to show in your soul/
There are queens and kings that you just need to find/
We think we know emotions, but there are much more of the kind/
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