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    Remember the name...

    this is to the beat remember the name by fort minor...
    i did this a while back, hope u like it .



    chorus.
    10% luck
    20% skill
    15% concentrated power of will
    5% pleasure
    50% pain
    100% to remember my name.

    verse.

    remember my name, when i take my walk 2 fame.
    its all for the money and the love of the game.
    rhyming for life, rhymin' with brutality.
    all of my dreams of become a reality.
    but i dont need my name in the light.
    i rhyme cus im good, and wut a delight.
    when ppl know who i am, and see that im good.
    skillz are so wicked and so understood.
    i just want to tell my story, and express my glory.
    when i beat ppl in battles they come out all gory*.
    but i do it for the love. 2 show wut im made of.
    me and rapping click, like a hand and a glove.
    a mirical from above. flyin like a dove.
    flyin so high, way up in the sky.
    rappin so fast, life just flys by.
    but i dont want fame, i dont need money.
    i rap cus i can, why is that so funny?
    i dont need 2 be a star. dont need 20 cars.
    i am who i am and u are who u are.
    i keep it real, i dont need 2 steal.
    i got life good, it sounds unreal.
    so remember my name. its all over the game.
    rappin is my life, and its not for the fame.



    10% luck
    20% skill
    15% concentrated power of will
    5% pleasure
    50% pain
    100% to remember my name.

    Verse.

    im rightin this verse off the top of my mind.
    and this is 50% better then my raps combind.
    and i try 2 have it laid out b4 i spit a rhyme.
    when i rap i aint got nuttin but my own time.
    and i have 2 have it played b4 i write a line.
    before i touch a key and before i do a grind.
    i have 2 have this shit all down in my mind.
    and ppl askin me why i have no time.
    cus im devoted 2 my raps, and makin nu rhymes.
    making new raps for the shake of mankind.
    ill make sure u remember my name in the back of ur mind.
    like i said, it aint for fame, and i aint gonna sign.
    dont want a record deal. this is my design.
    dont need a patient for this verse or line.
    cus its 100% mine o mine!!!!

    10% luck
    20% skill
    15% concentrated power of will
    5% pleasure
    50% pain
    100% to remember my name.


    yall ppl dont know who i am, and i know i dont talk much.
    but off the rhymes i throw im leavin u star struck.
    leavin u confused and up in a daze. ima do this here, all in my way.
    leavin u a stray, pitched way to the side.
    fallin in u chair, got u washed up and dryed.
    but i aint here for fame, its for the love of the game.
    i dont got 2 pay ppl 2 shout my name.
    but i still remain the newkid on the block.
    shovin that glock and makin my way 2 the top.
    i know wut i got, and i dont need more.
    i got better rhymes now, way better then before.
    but yall still got a long way 2 know me.
    knowin that may skillz are way beyond reach.
    and that my skillz are those of an artist.


    10% luck
    20% skill
    15% concentrated power of will
    5% pleasure
    50% pain
    100% to remember my name.

    u wont believe tha shit that comes out of my throat.
    i got ppl every where and they all equaly dope.
    ppl sayin im a prick and ppl say im a cock.
    girls wanna b with me, and ppl wish i get shot.
    but that aint gonna happen not in this life time.
    cus theres somthin protectin me and thats my rhmyes.
    cus through each line i bring somethin new to the world.
    somethin not just for me but them boys n girls.
    those who love me, and dont wanna see me go.
    just breakin it down in 3 different language modes.
    english, latin, and spanish too.
    and i do it 3 times the rhyme and its all for u.
    the ppl who made me, cus they know wut i am.
    and i know they love me cus they know i can.
    i can bring ill beats to the streets in a day.
    i make more in a week then u in a months pay.
    but it aint about money, and it aint about fame.
    its all about u remembering my name!!!
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    need links

    closed

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    First off. Your not a mod Tricky. So quit acting like you have athority.
    Second, you do need links, and you need to stop biting chorus's.
    Lmao. Newbs these days.

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    wow this nigga iz a bitter...u stole that chrous from Linkin Park My Nigga, I Live In The Bronx and i knew that...BITER BITER BAN THIS NIGGA

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    biting is no good,and even if you didnt bite tha shit you did,your verse were weak,too simple,no complexity in anything,your wordplay was non existent,rhyme scheme as extraordinarily simple,everything about this piece needs to be worked and improved on,and stop biting.


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    not bad could use a lil work tho
    nice drop tho mann

    keep droppin

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    although you just bit the chorus.. this whole piece WAS NOT a good introduction for you. No body on this site is feeling self glorification. It's not a good thing for a person to be going around saying, 100% you all remember my name! I'm DOpE! I'm Good! ..no! deffinatly NOT a topic people want to see. I feel that if you choose your topics a bit better, throw in some wordplay and a storyline, then you will deffinatly have yourself a great and decent piece. I love your spark and I see potential ..but if you write things based on THUGS and STREETS and YOURSELF ..then you will not make it anywhere on this site ..good luck.

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    ^^ i agree with cry, 1st you bit your chorus, and secondly that piece was wack. you need to elevate alot because noone's feeling self-glorification. write about something, or someone, not about yourself. pz.

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    Quote Originally Posted by :TreaZoN:
    biting is no good,and even if you didnt bite tha shit you did,your verse were weak,too simple,no complexity in anything,your wordplay was non existent,rhyme scheme as extraordinarily simple,everything about this piece needs to be worked and improved on,and stop biting.
    lmfao i agree wit T right here.. i mean seein as ur a newbie that don't look good.. biting... ya dig... i was pretty much basic, weren't nothing special so do elavate on ya shiit...1
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    wish some one will tell me some shit b4 i do it. anyways i did this back in jan. so its kinda old, but close it if yall dont like it and shit, and sorry for the bite and shit. really honest i didnt know. sorry.
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    hey man i guess u done good but u gotta alil prop. u need a chrouse dats all ya prop. n i liked ya 1st verse its was co0l ok dude ....and her's a verse i wish to add its in ya song

    i hold the mic. and spit fast , i have skill will not b waste
    i'll kill , my wish to die on the stage i cant wait
    u might dont know my best frnds is the beat
    shot me kill me i dont care this history will mantion ma domain
    and its all about ....remmber the name

    and remmba man we are the best of the rest and i wish to c ya in one of post

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    and to dark shadow... its the chorus to fort minor's remember the name dumbass. i even put it up there.
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    was'nt relli feel'n this umm coulda made it more interesting vocab as iight but your lines were BOREING srry but they were I did'nt evan read tha whole thing put me too sleep you have a potenial too b dope keep try'n you will get it

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    shoulda come up with your own hooks atleast....verses were way simple...basic ass freestyle type shit....you should work on ryming different words and ryming them better

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    Man No offense but I'm a newbie and to me that was way too simple even for me
    You need to work on ya flow a little make it a little more complex
    I know I'm not good by far but I know when Something needs work
    Also you could've flipped a few words to work on ya wordplay
    But the main thing to me was to me hooks show originality
    So to me if you don't create an original hook or just not have one then
    Your material isn't very original keep practicing keep spittin
    Cuzz you definitely have potential stay up kid 100

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