Lay Doubt. vs Efusive

[EyE QuE...]

Starting Fresh

12 line max
NO Crew
NO D/R
NO Recycling
NO Hate

You can re-post your verse
or write a new one.

[Lay Doubt.]

i'll wait for you to drop first.

[EyE QuE...]

Sounds Good

[Cuban)(Mobb]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=281671 go vote for it plz yall this is a battle for the ownership rights of a crew cmon

[EyE QuE...]

Post your verse when you get the chance..i msged you
a few times but you didnt answer so i just helped myself

dude was Born all loop sided with no connection rod
his whole birth was a fall..parents claimed him as "OH MY GOD"
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
Dude aint a pretty sight..just look up rat kangaroo
hes been around the blocks...and got hit by a few too
Im tired of rapping you so this is filler just try and surpass
saved by the bell..hell no..even skreetch would woop yo ass
Im nice when spittin dope with written..eh dumb bastard
that bullshit you post, lowers bullshits acceptable standards
.......you still lame while i bring the sickest of pains
buying a watch in hollywoon t/ only way u get a min of fame

[Lay Doubt.]

you ain't on my level nigga, everything that you're droppin is worn
if you wanna see Lay, fuck rap.. you better off just watchin a porn
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
i spit tight, preachin that your shit's liked.. don't step or start geek
or the next person feelin you will just be tryin to detect a heart beat

ez.

[Lay Doubt.]

voters - if you don't understand a line, just get at me and i'll tell you.

[Knukkles]

nice verses both of yal:


efusive...
you came hard wit mettas and punches..nice verse


lay doubt.....
you had hella punches and wordplay

my vote=Lay doubt

i feel that lay got this one wit a better flow i was feeling his more

[Knukkles]

but my vote dont count

but thats wat i thought anyway
lay doubt now vote on my topical

[EyE QuE...]

Good Verse Hommie..win or lose there should def be a re-match.

[Knukkles]

sorry to freepost
but could yal vote on my battles
vs legion and uncommon plz

[Cody Nash]

dude was Born all loop sided with no connection rod
his whole birth was a fall..parents claimed him as "OH MY GOD"
ok
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
not hard ..
Dude aint a pretty sight..just look up rat kangaroo
hes been around the blocks...and got hit by a few too
first line had nothing to do with second. good concept though
Im tired of rapping you so this is filler just try and surpass
saved by the bell..hell no..even skreetch would woop yo ass
no ..
Im nice when spittin dope with written..eh dumb bastard
that bullshit you post, lowers bullshits acceptable standards
ok ..not creative but direct
.......you still lame while i bring the sickest of pains
buying a watch in hollywoon t/ only way u get a min of fame
ok concept. REALLY bad wording

vs

you ain't on my level nigga, everything that you're droppin is worn
if you wanna see Lay, fuck rap.. you better off just watchin a porn
ok ..
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
lol good
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
lol dope ..
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
lmfao ..so consistant..
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
good wordplay ..not hard punch
i spit tight, preachin that your shit's liked.. don't step or start geek
or the next person feelin you will just be tryin to detect a heart beat
ok..

rofl ..so one sided. Lay Doubt obviously has way more experience than Efusive here and the battle was either unfair or Efusive was on a bad day. I've NEVER seen Efusive but his wording here was horrible, although he had SOME potentially good concepts. Lay Doubt however ..kept his verse consistant with punches ..a couple lame ones but overall a good verse and a direct win ..Good job

V/ Lay Doubt easy ..

[Knukkles]

thankz lay



but can i get some more votes in my other battler vs legion plz we need about2 more votes plz

[Lay Doubt.]

damn bitch nigga, quit cloggin my thread.

[EyE QuE...]

dude was Born all loop sided with no connection rod
his whole birth was a fall..parents claimed him as "OH MY GOD"
ok
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
not hard ..
Dude aint a pretty sight..just look up rat kangaroo
hes been around the blocks...and got hit by a few too
first line had nothing to do with second. good concept though
Im tired of rapping you so this is filler just try and surpass
saved by the bell..hell no..even skreetch would woop yo ass
no ..
Im nice when spittin dope with written..eh dumb bastard
that bullshit you post, lowers bullshits acceptable standards
ok ..not creative but direct
.......you still lame while i bring the sickest of pains
buying a watch in hollywoon t/ only way u get a min of fame
ok concept. REALLY bad wording

vs

you ain't on my level nigga, everything that you're droppin is worn
if you wanna see Lay, fuck rap.. you better off just watchin a porn
ok ..
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
lol good
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
lol dope ..
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
lmfao ..so consistant..
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
good wordplay ..not hard punch
i spit tight, preachin that your shit's liked.. don't step or start geek
or the next person feelin you will just be tryin to detect a heart beat
ok..

rofl ..so one sided. Lay Doubt obviously has way more experience than Efusive here and the battle was either unfair or Efusive was on a bad day. I've NEVER seen Efusive but his wording here was horrible, although he had SOME potentially good concepts. Lay Doubt however ..kept his verse consistant with punches ..a couple lame ones but overall a good verse and a direct win ..Good job

V/ Lay Doubt easy ..

Respect your vote, this is probably the worse verse i have
ever written...yeah im just having a really bad few days