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    My Brother - Feat. Tricky-D

    [Tricky-D]
    my brother, i dont see why u trippin
    instead of being so hardheaded, try and listen
    i kno i've been fucked up, but right now i'm lookin out
    i tell u that u can be anything, but u reply wit a look of doubt
    i see u time to time up on the couch, gamin or watchin TV
    how blind ya optiks can be, find the time to stop and go read
    ur never talkin to me, i'll help u get shit off ya back
    remember the big dude that snuffed u? & when i hit him with the bat?
    Dave, this is a fact... your future is now
    u think that skool is useless shit now, but jus do it for now
    it'll really give ur life some praise, maybe not right away
    and one day, u'll be thankful for the advice i gave
    i'm not nice you say, shit maybe your right
    but lately at night, i've been hatin the times
    that i ever gave u a fight, or gave u hits from the hand
    my only excuse: I was trying to help make you into a man
    that shit wasnt planned, if I could go back in time
    i'd know thats a crime, to throw backhands.... why?
    because it wasnt just physical, i hurt you inside too
    is it cuz of me your so stubborn? what the FUCK did i do?
    at least you don't thug, do drugs, bust slugs, or live to buck
    but ur innocence cant hide the fact that you dont give a fuck
    schools important, brother... do us both a favor
    let your mind grow so later at skool u can go major
    out of control behavior? why do i gotta hear this for?
    i'll go to give u advice, u tell me "fuck you" and slam ya door
    what do i fear this for? its your life, not mine
    but i love you bro, and I have since all time
    i tell you all the things you could be
    I aint a killer, but for u, my brother, I would be
    I'm not Dad, thats nothing of news... but somethings that true
    is that i know your IQ, how u gonna be dumb up in skool?
    I told u i'd never let a soul get away with fuckin with u
    but when your the one fuckin w/ yourself, what do I do?


    [INST1GAT0R]
    Yo man, I know it might be hard to understand
    It’s complicated, but pay attention if you can
    Sometimes I might seem distant to you
    It cos you would bully me infront of your crew
    Tryna make me stand up for myself?
    Dickhead you should put that shit on the shelf
    You know you hit me to try and hurt me
    And teach me a lesson when my words got dirty
    But you taught me to walk round flippin the bird
    You taught me to walk round like I jus don’t care
    I copied you in everythin you did, the way you walk
    Like a fake ass gangsta, putting an accent on when you talk
    And cos I followed you I learnt how to live your life
    I learnt leave the pistol at home; jus take out a knife
    I learnt how to live an urban life, I learnt how to write
    About things that are really important, but I forgot
    That your important aswell, we brothers and we hate
    Each other, we never conversate, we never relate
    To shit that’s happenin, I jus wanna pull the Mac 10 n
    Aim it at everyone that ever gave you shit, like you did
    When that dude approached me and gave me bullshit
    You stuck up for me; you didn’t even need a loaded clip
    And I respect that, and that’s why I wish we talked
    Cos we should get on so well together, you stalked
    Me when I was smaller, moldin my existence
    But I fucked it up; I started a stage of resistance
    And in every situation you pretended you didn’t know me
    I was jus the other kid to you, but hopefully
    Through my reply to your letter, you’ll know better
    About me, about what I turned into, I don’t need a berretta
    But I do need you to know, I’m your brother, whatever the weather
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    uppin

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    upp fukers

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    i liked this one, i could even relate to it, flow, structure was good, vocabs could be a little bit better, the same with ryhmes, but overall its a very good piece

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    hey i liked this one alot i thought the structure was good had some good rhymes and was just an overall good write.

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    good drop...nice topic and nice rhymes.....flow was smooth made it an easy read
    strucutre was good....vocab was alright....complexity was alright as well
    overall this was a pretty good drop and it was enjoyable to read..........
    Keep it up homie........peace

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    well this was a decent piece..yall had some creative lines and emotion but i think a little complexity would do u justice..You guys should center your piece and make it look presentable and then make those presentable looking lines have a dope point.....

    nice drop--but could be improved-no hate

    pz

    return da fav on my ish famz

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