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    Looking Behind These Bloody Eyes (SS)



    Looking behind these bloody eyes



    -1976. Yambuku, Zaire. Currently the Democratic Republic of the Congo

    Looking behind these bleeding eyes you'll find no pleading cries nor cure
    Endure my feeding, tries to quell my greeting will spread my wrath for sure
    A path of death is all that's left in place of this pathogen passed by men
    Amassed in rituals, I'm passed in funerals of those I've last done in

    A village killed swift without a trace to my make or place of origin
    Faces pouring red bleeding from every orifice, no ignoring this
    Bloodied fears mow down sun beaten cheeks of African tribesmen
    Last of kin meet to clean bodies of the victims in which I've been

    I'm passed around like party favors in celebration, my flavor is death
    Savor each breath as I'm lurking inside speeding demise like I'm meth
    Some say I've always been, hiding in retrovirus in ancestors of men
    Others claim I'm bio engineered, weaponized in sectors and dens

    Inspectors in general theorize I'm specialized, my general order's to kill
    A vector of General orders realized, but humanity's paying the bill
    Two hundred and eighty fell in my first wave of recorded attack
    Sordid details & facts published by WHO document my ability & knack,

    ...to quitely kill & leave few to fuel the fires that rage against me
    a pathogenic gun for hire whose only desire,
    ...is to aquire a new host & spread my seed of death within thee
    eternal rest's my gift via fits of haemorrhagic fever,
    ...receivers bleeding from their ass, mouth, ears, nose and eyes
    surprised by the rapid onset of death I dished in their tribes,
    ..I've thrived under controlled conditions, primmed for munitions
    designed for politicians control of various sects,
    ...vary the sex & I kill with the same skill of a madman gone vexed
    enter the sandman, the only question's who's next?

    Zaire, Sudan, Uganda, Gabon?
    My most recent up rise in Angola.. Who am I?
    I go by the chosen name of EBOLA

    ...Looking behind these bleeding eyes you may find human ties,
    uncovered lies, and weapons tied to pathogenic crimes...


    -To date 1287 deaths have been attributed to Ebola, the first known outbreak of which killed 280 in Yambuku, Zaire.


    Naturally occurring pathogen or man made weapon?

    You decide...

    :Looking behind these bloody eyes:

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    alotta emotion in this, nice vocab, it seems like it would sound good on audio, you always drop nice but this was really good... i like how you managed to get extensive vocab in with the multi's and still have it make sence in every line, stayed on your topic the whole time, extremely original...
    this is no doubt a 10/10...
    really nice drop...
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    thanks man, it's apreciated...

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    Damn, talk about being slept on...

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    damn......DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE..............did i mention that this was dope?.but on a real this was fucking amazing dude.......you do audio??? cuz this would be dope in audio.fucking great multies and vocab.....your imagery was dopeness at its highest level,you never came off the topic,it was stucutred very well and it all made sense.This was easily in the top 3 of all the OMs i've seen on this site,original topic,aint nver seen anything like it before.i know you don't like numerical ratings so i'ma just say that this was top class......dope as fuck dude.nice one

    yo leave feed on my OM...it's in my sig

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    Thanks for the replies, you should peep more of my OM's or verses in general if you liked this one. This was just a quick SS verse. Oh yeah, and yes, I'm an emcee, I just don't post much online, but I am making music off the net though.

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    word I will definitely,I've seen your OM about the girl getting raped,i think it was in a tourney or something i dunno...but it was fucking dope......oh and can you send me one of your audios? by tha way can you plz hit up the OM in my sig?

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    hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=2752893&q=hi

    here is a quick something..

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    Holy shit dude that was seriously dope,your style is like no other I have heard before.your lryics were out of this world,and all together fucking amazing....damn i wish I was you lol

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    lmao, that is just a qucik take on a song we shall finish up as soon as my bands lead singer gets the time, we are so damn busy with shows, it's hard to find studio time.

    peep this...

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=2753313&q=hi

    my daughter is on the final version of this song. It me SMZ from here on RB and my band, my daughter dropped a few bars on this too, just not on this draft version...

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    iight this was fuckin unreal.Man I look up to you as a big inspiration.The shit you come out with is always dope and you always keep it at that level.Your imagery is amazing,.I have never seen a writer more creative than you,always full of ideas just waiting to release them.The read was very intresting also,I was tuned in from start to finish.All I can say is excellent.I dont needa say "Keep this going" cause I know you will.Great stuff bro
    Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
    On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....

    But how you fall doesn't matter
    Its how you land

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    Thanks, it's rare now days for me to hear members have followed my work. I am glad you like it man, your feedback is really appreciated. Lately members are busy with d/r their crew membger drops who are avaerage at best... Look forward to seeing you in more of my Om threads.

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    Yeah bro can't wait untill next drop.At least that is something to look foward to.Anyway i'm not gonna clog this up so pz....
    Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
    On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....

    But how you fall doesn't matter
    Its how you land

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    yeah bounce this was a nice piece but a very scary topic. anyway, your structure was amazing, you used wordplay like ive never seen anyone use before and overall this was great. you sounded great on the audio. your not like the other herbs who just posts here to get their posts up. good job. pz.

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