Conflicted death

[2hot2handle]

Scale 1 through 10 the lyrics diminish in seconds
Yet the cycle continues questions learned lessons
Groups with agendas shootin back at gangs over shit
Too many dudes too sensitive like they allergic
Come together like the Bolsheviks under Lenin
Riots spark when A vs B leads to Armageddon
Death becomes a practice as heaven is questioned
Lies are propaganda and truth is urban legend
Stressed out people cross the line to end it all
After the drugs, sex, couldnt rid the alcohol
Addiction to conflicts always are unnecessary
We cant live forever, our lives are temporary


Memories are the death of the past's murder
And suicide becomes the future's deserter
The present is now that is unopened wrap
So many issues we deal with that overlaps
We get through each day of what we portray
We may not have the image we want today
Simple as that but yet so hard to capture
Depression lets it not matter what we chasin after
Its a disaster when tragedy rapes the reality
All ya hope, wishes, and dreams are fatalities
A fallacy is apparent in the mirror of mankind
Ya lookin through trash and there nothin ya can find
Turn ya head as ya heart beats uncontrollably
Fast breaths as reality fades away in the ugly
Left sittin in confusion dizziness blurs ya vision
Declared dead when ya life results in a collision

[2hot2handle]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post4071165

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=276530

[Silas]

Good to see you'r back man, theres really not anything i can say that i fouund bad about this piece. Didn't lack anything in my point of view. Nice and simple and short, flowed well, and voacbulary was real good. Concept was ok and went good. Structure was great, but in like 1 or 2 lines it messed up the structure but that didn't matter. Nice stuff right here man, i always favored you'r stuff. Peace

[true2life]

nice piece man, i like the real life asspect to the whole thing, keep on

[2hot2handle]

yeah thanks guys. I tend to usually take a break after I make a piece. But I need to get into a habit of bein consistent, but when I make one ( i think its good) but most enjoy it.

uppin

[2hot2handle]

uppin

[White Dice]

u gotta great flow. your rap went togetha easily. you get sum props form me. i mena cuz i know its hard ta rap they way do and u do it so easily.

[2hot2handle]

uppin

[2hot2handle]

uppin

[topher]

Nice drop,liked the imagery you placed and the flow here.The multies smooth out everything and i liked the storyline.I didnt really think this would've been could especially from the topic named,but reading the storyline was pretty cool.Some people have good storylines and an open mic,but it's the title that people ignore and automatically dodge.Over all i liked this piece,it was pretty cool.

[big j da fat boy]

this was really nice. you did ya thang. it had imagery, flow, vocab, and emotion in it. you just didn't have anythang wrong on this peice. i like how you did ya rymes an the way you used history in it. to me thats a true m.c. just keep at it dawg. peace out

[2hot2handle]

Thanks, uppin.

[Lastofadyinbreed]

i feel dis piece speaks out to me emotional and stuff but its good coz it speaks out todays issues in society but bro make more pieces like this more often i look forward to seein what u write bout next im sure it will be good

[B.I.Detained.]

You can't kid, a kidder. Get the 2nd link to feedback or this is closed. You should know better

[2hot2handle]

You can't kid, a kidder. Get the 2nd link to feedback or this is closed. You should know better

Oh shit, sorry. I didnt know I accidentally put my piece there. I put my other link there to replace it. My bad.