15-20 lines
no dick rydin drop verse soon
TREACH P
Opponent
15-20 lines
no dick rydin drop verse soon
Soft Focus
...The Return Of The Legends...
check in when ready
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...The Return Of The Legends...
ima drop tommpr couldnt be bothered doin it now
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...The Return Of The Legends...
yo trench check out my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=43869
Ayo Nuclear weaponz,My victory be precise learn too soon shut your mouth because dick be your only vice/
You just another parasite that ima bout to squash with my pinky,na nah you be worse than lice/
Your veses posses no irrleivence, no real life issue, you wanna shoulda to cry on, FUCK YOU,heres a tissue/
Its funny how your life was ended berfore it was started,Your boyfriend yung dees upset because you was killed and soon be parted/
You like a a an 18th century sallon brawl it all started when i pulled the ace/
Ha ha i guess you will never no what its like to be a flyweight intercepted by punchlines that stung you like a can of mace/
Even thogh you think your hard, you dont posess wordplay,because your lerical pool only stretches ankle deep
You diggin yourself a shallow grave homey, this is one agreement you fogot to meet/
Universal paramedics couldnt fix your sorriful pleas/
Jsut like that homosexual incident you got caught in you just claimed "i droped my keys"/
Last edited by Forlorn; May 7th, 2003 at 03:09 AM
Soft Focus
...The Return Of The Legends...
you better not no show
Soft Focus
...The Return Of The Legends...
Just found tha thread lol. i'm a key it up right now.
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Ayo.....
I'm doin a mistake, i should pull a NO SHOW IN FACT/
Cuz postin next to Treach, is tha only time i'm CLOSE TO WACK/
Bite marks all over his back(biting), proves that its skillz that he lack/
Tryin so hard to outwrite me, your crackin your wrists/
Tha closest you had to a dope punch was crack in your fists/
If this bitch slapped me wid gifts his presence (presents) couldnt be existent/
If he was trapped on a forklift his elevation still would be resistent/
Fuel your pencil tip by stuffin yourself wid paint chips on a platter/
It dont matter, either way your gonna get lead in your bladder/
Your raps are like stages made of meadows, cuz your rap game is plain/
Your joined that platoon cuz no other crew wants you in it's CAMPaign/
This bitch be pullin verses out of his purse at random/
Seldom getting tha outcome you expect like an unsuccessful ransom/
You crash in defeat, askin tha paramedics on websites "how do I speak after i was beat to retreat"/
I'll rip out this kids vocal cords, have him speakin in tongues/
Battlin me?? he dont need to smoke, to get heat in his lungs/
My words are breathe takin, when i dropped this verse Treach was purely asphixiated/
Whole crew loser, he should say fuck crews cuz he sux too much to be affiliated/
Tha closest you had to a dope punch was crack in your fists!!!
That shit was too funny! Nuc definitely won this one with better punches. Both verses were aight but his was nicer.
Vote: Weaponz
Last edited by Opie M.; May 6th, 2003 at 11:51 PM
I amitt, my verse had madd effort behind it lol. I dropped a fuckin bomb.
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uppin for votes.
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VOTE = WEAPONZ...
REASON: He came wit str8 heat..nice flow...tite structure..all of that...don't get me rong, treach p's verse wuz nice too...tho i thought a lot of his linez were too long which messed up tha flow...
iight..
Treach, return tha favor nd vote on my battle wit punk'd:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=44568
Your joined that platoon cuz no other crew wants you in it's CAMPaign/
What the hell is that supposed to meean?
there is no crew called tha platoon
Soft Focus
...The Return Of The Legends...
Pretty close, both had pretty good drops, both gettin better, there were a fair few things I didn't like...Weaponz said, "Yeah I'ma key this up" then said "I put MADD Effort into this" dogg, don't claim u KEY it and then don't oh k...But no hate in it, I reckon Treach just got it, I really liked this line..
Even thogh you think your hard, you dont posess wordplay,because your lerical pool only stretches ankle deep
That was good, both had good lines...I reckon Treach just got it, by like half a point haha good battle kids...Peace!!!!
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Ok, treach, you wanted to know what i meant by that line right? platoon is another word for crew or squad i never said tha name of it or it would of been in CAPITALS or "quotation marks". And meadskillz i did key it up, but i put effort into it as well. And i dont like tha way you said i'm gettin better when i prolly been doin this longer then you have. No beef unless you got, but i'm not no fuckin herb.
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