The Last Dedication

[P. Mortuus]

The last commiserations given, Last congratulations received
The man stirred to sleep, whilst seeking light he was deceived
Congregational promises shattered, the wind destroys the willows
Rain pelts the windows, lonely figures readjusting cold pillows
Arouse old man, the impending glory waits, to greet thy feet
Within the cocooned sanctuary of sacred groves, a juvenile is beat
The mages glimpse the imminent, one day we all shall leave
Modern Civilization open your eyes, more than death life is to grieve
Political theories applied, three witches stir the cauldron alight
Labourers, liberals and conservatives lay down the arena and fight
Blasphemous worms tarnish the man; abundant sparks light aflame
Chinese whispers commence, the first or last who is to blame
Forests are scorched; Mother Nature pained, she shouts and screams
Bubonic bodies plagued with evil, corroded by patchworks of dreams
The scorned world sombrely watches, as a man states his ambition
“I have a dream, that one day”…the sermon which began his mission
Tainted hordes of men rejected the truth of this virtuous man
The metal violated the flesh, single messenger massacred by the clan
The irony is immense; the dark waits for the messiah to bring them light
Crown of thorns as a gift, as man crucifies the answer to pain and plight
The last dedication is given, eat my flesh and drink my blood
The inscrutable men watch, as truth is buried in marshes and mud

[ghostflow]

DAMN.....
.....yo Pak i been here since day 1 when u did OMs.. and you show alot of elevation fams.this peace was common, but the flow was off the hook,the vocabulary was real deep, i felt the emotion in this, also, the structure was so clear to understand, but fams keep writing....9.2/10
u deserve that OMHOF

WoRD^

[P. Mortuus]

Linkages here:

Link 1:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=275759

[P. Mortuus]

DAMN.....
.....yo Pak i been here since day 1 when u did OMs.. and you show alot of elevation fams.this peace was common, but the flow was off the hook,the vocabulary was real deep, i felt the emotion in this, also, the structure was so clear to understand, but fams keep writing....9.2/10
u deserve that OMHOF

WoRD^

Thanks preciate it cause ya seen ma old stuff and ma new stuff, this was written for all ma homies and crews as a last piece before i go on holiday

[P. Mortuus]

Linkage number 2:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=275463

[ghostflow]

Thanks preciate it cause ya seen ma old stuff and ma new stuff, this was written for all ma homies and crews as a last piece before i go on holiday

enjoy your holiday fams.........and bring me some cheese cake when u come bakc.....word<

[P. Mortuus]

Lol.........Holiday=Organising my life not travelling the world lol

[D. Jizzle.]

this is tight tha topic is true and good
u kept tha wordplay up all thru
flow was smooth
this was 8.5-10

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks preciate it

[GrimmyReaps]

pak IT SUCKED...naw...JK...why you say if any thing is wrong tell me...theres nothin wrong...you need 2 keep mentoring me when u get back it was a good peice alot of good vocab and nice wordplay and flow it wasent as deep as some of your other peices but it was still a great peice...9.5/10...

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks preciate it..........

[V.I.G]

WOW, this shit was fuckin amazing! Its complexity was dope, crazy flow, high amount of vocab, dope imagery and most of all I got a real feel for the story as I kept reading and thinking.

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks dog, preciate it

[Ryan]

yo dogg this shit was off tha hook for real...crazy flow, multies...there aint NOTHIN bad to possibly be said bout this piece...i agree wit ghostflow...this is an OMHOF piece rigth here...

stay up fams an see ya when ya return...

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks dog, realy preciate it