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Thread: Life in A Cage

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    Efface The Burning Feelin
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    Life in A Cage

    ~Life in A Cage~

    Life is a story filled an over flowed w/ impurity
    Increasing the vulnerability of devilin’ deeds
    Satanic thoughts overcome your mental states
    Erratically brought crashing upon self like waves
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    At end nothing is learned, a good life over turned
    Like computers your whole soul crashes an burns
    W/nothing to maintain balance, decisions made wrong
    enraged an caged by hate but manage to remain strong
    As if captured from freedom an trapped in a deep zoo
    Taken away, a harsh treatment, w/ empty dreams none2 pursue
    Trapped w/ paragraphs an testaments, verses an sentences
    Locked up by bars an rhythm, time an minutes that are menaces
    So many things racing in my head, lap after lap, like a Nascar Derby
    deeply submerged like a needle a thread, in fact, they buried
    meaningless, like myth an fables, trying to paint a mural w/ words
    Absurd? Naw its true, it don’t work, in fact the whole story is a blur
    Comas an quotes cant express the true emotion of a person
    They can be engulfed by shadows, or be a different image or version
    I step One step further, more of my own soul withers….
    Presence of God’s murmurs, more City walls whisper.
    I be down for what ever, agony whenever in any weather.
    Competition doesn’t matter, cold nights in December…….
    Fought for my hood on any occasion , lives fading………………………..
    ….with hardships hood life changes perspective of all its creations
    Sometimes I talk to God and he doesn’t enter my mind to give a response
    Trying to figure out my flaws as if I were a lost dog my future has been tossed
    They say God makes your life easier leaving me question that whole statement
    As if faith in his spirit doesn’t reach so he just leaves us stranded w/ no changes
    Eyes blurry, livin this………Variety of Lost Images…
    How long will this shit persist…..cant retaliate no more, legs don’t give
    the public persona through the eyes of the crowd
    Looking all over the place but no friend is found
    Cant control my self im so steamed,when will I cool?
    various false figures actin hard but they see threw
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    Withered soul, so when I die I wont beg 4 my life yo
    Cant see heavens gates, is this what I thrived fo‘ ?
    Life is crazy cant be evaluated, cant check the bitch before hand
    It molds you an shows what it created…...an unholy satanic man
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    structure was alright..flow was very nice..topic was interesting
    rhymes were nice..same with the multies......
    vocab was pretty descent...same with complexity
    overall this was a pretty good drop....peace

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    2 link needed homey .

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    Excellent topic, good flow all the way through, terrific imagery, good vocab
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    Efface The Burning Feelin
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    bump and grind
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    yeah nice joint i reckon.. rythym was coo.. vocab was good... wording was on ..
    concept had sum deepness fosho

    Withered soul, so when I die I wont beg 4 my life yo
    Cant see heavens gates, is this what I thrived fo‘ ?
    Life is crazy cant be evaluated, cant check the bitch before hand
    It molds you an shows what it created…...an unholy satanic man


    yeah fosho i'm feelin that..
    sometimes i feel real evil myself

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    Efface The Burning Feelin
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    bump for more feed
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    ur flow was aiight, en structure too, peze

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    it was kool rythm

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