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    Status Is...

    Status is merely a precise incision of lyrics...
    Writtens get literal pictures of scriptures to hear it
    Whatever is coveted i fear it, like seize of my breathing
    Rhmyes change into organical leads and now im feeding


    I strike wit lyrical knifes... that insert to physical lifes
    The fear it will rise, is nearerly nearer than sight
    My height produces might that i abuse for fist fights
    Strike and miss light the same way that i execute mics
    My full cause gets battered and bruised over a chord
    Im overboard a shouvanistic poster boy overlord
    Goin strong, withholdin what? cause most of its gone
    I cant even comprehend how was the chosen kid born?
    Was so dark, he rose before the light woulda sparked
    With no part, no destiny... whole life was an art
    Chartered paths of martyrs in a half short of a life
    Crossed borders and walls further than laws suffice
    Im not...bored of christ... nor beleiver understand
    I just depict at all the theories based at gods righthand
    Im not.. a true abuser he's a she? give me proof of her
    I wont deny it from existance, the prophets of lucifer
    Who's supplyin all the crusifying lead to useless crying
    Nooses flying left and right when all the afro youth was dying
    My proof is shining, im defiant as i whoop in triumph
    Give use to trying... beleive me thats the truth in lying
    Give me use of science and ill show you the wrong
    Science is my own child but it has aided the bombs
    Created the strong, degraded the weak and ended pain
    Its all science that will end air, and soon will end rain
    This insane's a passage to my brain and my mind
    Refraining from rhyme, these passages degraded in time


    umm... just what was on my mind


    peace!


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    good shyt hommie. it was fire all way through niggah flow vocab all good niggah keep bringing it hott hommie i was feelin this shyt niggah.
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    You have a very decent open mind, this was really good read for me. The vocabulary was decent, and the wordplay was good couldn't have been any better. And also, the structure was good so i really can't say anything bad on this. good job.

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