Confessions

[Artikqlit]

Iigh...check it

Take a moment ta blurt out all yo confessions//
cas wen i spit this...those keepsakes'll turn inta yo agressions//
Consider me bein a blessing, this is my 1st act of affection//

The world now...it's like i'm swimmin in an ocean full of lies//
The waves too strong for ya or do you not hear tha "honest ppl's" cries?//
Thought you went to listen ta 'Jedi Mind'...but you aint do nothin of that kind//
That's how it is...People be sayin one thing n doin anotha//
but that aint gon go on no mo', i'm closin tha shutta//
I've had enuff of answers like "it wuzn't me" or "who told u dat?"//
You kno very well 'what' told me...the world...//
...how every conversation we have today is untruthful chat//

I kno some of y'all may be thinkin i'm exaggeration//
Maybe, I am...but so what...hopefully i'll keep ya peeps imaginin//
A world where there is no honest, truthful or meaningful confessions//
There is no questions...just a lie ta 'fill-in' fo that particular lesson//

Eventually, that's what this world'll turn into n become//
Think about it...That's change yo mind on this matter, some//

Iight..some feedback plz.
Hit mine ^ n i'll get u back

[Bashire]

Tight , , , but should have been longer

[Artikqlit]

IIgh...Thanks..^^ Already replied ta urs: Bash

Lookin fa more..

[Artikqlit]

uppin..C'mon peeps more feedback

[Genetikz]

tight dawg, all very true, maybe coulda expanded da lentgh but overall nice feelin drop..

[NH]

word this was nice man im liking it

what you say is true and you portrayed what u wanted to say nicely

flow was nice it was abit short but still nice

thanks for peepin mine bro stay up and maybe a collab from me n u shud be in order

pz

[Artikqlit]

Thanks peeps..oh n nh, hit me ^ on aim about that collabo...StreetLegend 02

[xXelementXx]

yo0o im returning the favor lol// ur shyt was tight but like they said the longer it is the more feelin u can put into it..

[Artikqlit]

Thanks mayn...

More feedback plz...

[xXelementXx]

yo0o street cheeak my new shyt out its called crazy return da favor

[a-g]

this was a coo drope . it was real discriptive but like first dude said could have been longer.

[xXelementXx]

street return the favor

[Hidden]

tight drop, the flow was steady and the wordplay was good

[soprano]

ITS YA BOY SOPRANO I FELT DAT, YOU WROTE THAT LIKE IT CAME FROM DA HEART. YOU CAN GO READ MINE AND TELL M ABOUT IT.
HOLLA