PS: -wordplay- (0-0) Vs. Feeble Minded (0-0)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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[Richard Parker]

I'm in. I'm kinda disappointed about last season so you might want to try. good luck

[Katch-22]

-in

[Richard Parker]

Umm, don't know if you're coming. I wouldn't bother if i was you though

[Richard Parker]

your here for the wrecking, cuz it cant be to win, i'll buckle this geek
just to see you at your prime, leaving embarassed in a couple of weeks
plus you can't call my next line corny, cuz faggot ya iffy im better
Im cold bitch... I told you so! now go fucking knit me a sweater
but fuck that. lets get real - facing me will leave you burned & abused
especially naming yourself after something you're still learning to use
this is our first match, no show, with my hype i merk kids
& you're only out to get even. . .one person to like your verses
I'd say your an alias... but your new, so i believe its guessing
ironic how this'll be a first for us. . but for you it'll be a second
and its a waste to care, your wackness is enough to make u stare
and I already showed you up, knowing you'd never make it there

[Katch-22]

every single psychic prediction said they think that im losin
thats some feeble minded thinkin, there must be some confusion
dont mean to be usin ya name, i know its kinda cheap, but...
come on...feeble minded's like a coupon for a free punch
he just cant keep up and wont survive this undefeated
ya dickridaz 1 thing in common: no vaginaz just the penis
feebs has got 10,000 posts cuz he's addicted to the net, man
has sex through webcams, with strange men, or with his left hand
leave him usin bedpans, brokin jaw, this ho gets whored
he can only beat my wordplay if he cuts my vocal chords
i get bored n fall asleep, readin lines from feeble's mind
while i spit shit so clean that it'll make ya speakaz shine
thats da reason y ill smoke dis kid, cant run, its hopeless bitch
i spare none when i strike emcees like some bowlin pins
and you wont get this win, your just a mod, not god
but you can ban people, thats how feeble's cock gets hard

[Tae Profit]

whooo, ayo feeb's he show'd up. This the best battle ive seen so far in preseason, both did it like it was the season. I couldnt decifer who got it when it came to flow ya both murda'd that. Structure was also a tie, neither had amazing structure but both were decent. Vocab goes to feeb's just barely. While neither of u separated urselves when it came to multi's. Now punches go as follows:

your here for the wrecking, cuz it cant be to win, i'll buckle this geek
just to see you at your prime, leaving embarassed in a couple of weeks
ok...
plus you can't call my next line corny, cuz faggot ya iffy im better
Im cold bitch... I told you so! now go fucking knit me a sweater
decent
but fuck that. lets get real - facing me will leave you burned & abused
especially naming yourself after something you're still learning to use
LOL, good shyt
this is our first match, no show, with my hype i merk kids
& you're only out to get even. . .one person to like your verses
kinda weak
I'd say your an alias... but your new, so i believe its guessing
ironic how this'll be a first for us. . but for you it'll be a second
yea i get it
and its a waste to care, your wackness is enough to make u stare
and I already showed you up, knowing you'd never make it there
decent closer


Overall: Good verse but not spectacular as you would have made it seem. But still a good, solid, consistent verse which from you nothing less shud b expected.

vs.

every single psychic prediction said they think that im losin
thats some feeble minded thinkin, there must be some confusion
ha, most people wont get the secondary wordplay, dont kno if u even did it on purpose
dont mean to be usin ya name, i know its kinda cheap, but...
come on...feeble minded's like a coupon for a free punch
forced rhyme, ok punch
he just cant keep up and wont survive this undefeated
ya dickridaz 1 thing in common: no vaginaz just the penis
LOL, yea i hear u
feebs has got 10,000 posts cuz he's addicted to the net, man
has sex through webcams, with strange men, or with his left hand
LMAO, multi's made this line killa!!!
leave him usin bedpans, brokin jaw, this ho gets whored
he can only beat my wordplay if he cuts my vocal chords
decent, shud of took "my" out tho...wud of made it general/personal at the same time
i get bored n fall asleep, readin lines from feeble's mind
while i spit shit so clean that it'll make ya speakaz shine
nah, self glory
thats da reason y ill smoke dis kid, cant run, its hopeless bitch
i spare none when i strike emcees like some bowlin pins
lol, good shyt...i aint catch it at first
and you wont get this win, your just a mod, not god
but you can ban people, thats how feeble's cock gets hard
nah, weak closer

in the end, i gotta go wordplay cuz he had the punches that made me laugh(3-1) and in my mind, punches count more than vocab...good battle.

V//-wordplay-

EDIT: just put the "(3-1)" in my final explanation

[SirusX]

your here for the wrecking, cuz it cant be to win, i'll buckle this geek
just to see you at your prime, leaving embarassed in a couple of weeks
-bare assed? naw didnt like it.
plus you can't call my next line corny, cuz faggot ya iffy im better
Im cold bitch... I told you so! now go fucking knit me a sweater
-lol
but fuck that. lets get real - facing me will leave you burned & abused
especially naming yourself after something you're still learning to use
-prolly one of the better disses on his name. simple but nice
this is our first match, no show, with my hype i merk kids
& you're only out to get even. . .one person to like your verses
-ok, not that nice
I'd say your an alias... but your new, so i believe its guessing
ironic how this'll be a first for us. . but for you it'll be a second
-meh
and its a waste to care, your wackness is enough to make u stare
and I already showed you up, knowing you'd never make it there
-ok, punch is different.

ok drop,

v

every single psychic prediction said they think that im losin
thats some feeble minded thinkin, there must be some confusion
-no
dont mean to be usin ya name, i know its kinda cheap, but...
come on...feeble minded's like a coupon for a free punch
-soft
he just cant keep up and wont survive this undefeated
ya dickridaz 1 thing in common: no vaginaz just the penis
-wack
feebs has got 10,000 posts cuz he's addicted to the net, man
has sex through webcams, with strange men, or with his left hand
-weak
leave him usin bedpans, brokin jaw, this ho gets whored
he can only beat my wordplay if he cuts my vocal chords
-this is text... lol
i get bored n fall asleep, readin lines from feeble's mind
while i spit shit so clean that it'll make ya speakaz shine
-not a diss. i didnt like it much
thats da reason y ill smoke dis kid, cant run, its hopeless bitch
i spare none when i strike emcees like some bowlin pins
-not nice
and you wont get this win, your just a mod, not god
but you can ban people, thats how feeble's cock gets hard
-soft.

its like, your talkin bout his genitials and shit... why you thinking bout that shit?

v/feeble

[MaRVJay]

sirus u a fuckin fagget dat just wanna fit in with dez LLL niggaz

- you should keep freeposting... -1 vote possible dq

[Meks.]

feeble came nice the other kid came gay.

v/feebs

[Daz]

lmfao theres no contest.
Feeble won this hands down.
if thats the voting we gonna have in this league im leaving.

[phlymo]

why aren't the verses even? don't you have to match if you drop second?
anyway, i don't have a clue how people can possibly vote wordplay here, that's just idiocy. fair enough it's an opinion but it's not even close:

this is our first match, no show, with my hype i merk kids
& you're only out to get even. . .one person to like your verses
I'd say your an alias... but your new, so i believe its guessing
ironic how this'll be a first for us. . but for you it'll be a second
and its a waste to care, your wackness is enough to make u stare
and I already showed you up, knowing you'd never make it there

vs

sorry but nothing really

feebs verse was ok, had some humour in it, obvious nameplay, decent quotables but nothing that nice. that sweater line was corny as fuck but i laughed.
wordplay ur verse was kinda basic, played feeble nameplay, a dickrider line and way too much self glory towards the end.
v/feebs

[Automatic.]

rofl wtf?

v/ feeble

easily.

[Mars.]

v/feebs, 1 sided.

but fuck that. lets get real - facing me will leave you burned & abused
especially naming yourself after something you're still learning to use
rofl.

[Jae Skriptz]

yeah... I'ma bout to get on d/r patrol. wordplay
had TWO whack nameplays then a whole bunch of
filler. the left hand line was played in 2002 and he carried
it off badly... the whole thing was just eh...

Feebs came nice. Had a couple of line that made me
chuckle. the name play, one person to like ur verses,
and first-second, all nice.

v/ Feeble