i think tha rhymes r gud, was feelin tha emotion tha vocab was not bad either. keep wrkin on it. nd keep it comin.
i think tha rhymes r gud, was feelin tha emotion tha vocab was not bad either. keep wrkin on it. nd keep it comin.
good emotion through out. good structure.. flow was on point. more complexity next time to elevate your writing.. keep it up.
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thanks for the props cuz............aight my niggas................where yall at?????????????????????
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This was a decent drop, the multis were decent, 1 or 2 may have been a little forced, other than that, good drop
yeah my nigga..........................aight then.it hink i'll bump this shit up a lil bit............................
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im a bout' to bump this shit up a lil bit..........................please.if ya care......post some comments..................peace my niggas/.................
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this was a iight piece right here man.Ya just need to fix up that structure a lil bit,it was a bitt alll over the place.Try make your verse more decrative too always goes well when reading a verse.Throw a lil more emotion into what you are tlken about.Just lacked a lil bit of that.There were some nice lines in there bro but jus more emotion iight.Keep it up fam
pz.....
Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
But how you fall doesn't matter
Its how you land
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