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  1. February 18th, 2006, 08:58 PM #1
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    South Side Bronx

    South Side iz Where im from, Where Blue Rags Dont Come
    Little Kids get Shot for no reason, all year 'round is known as the killing season
    I keep my nine close, ready to bust, slice the nigga's Throat
    You cant walk on the block without trippin on a glock
    and you cant fuck a bitch, without a condom on your dick
    where if u kill some one without permission you may have to pay a hugh comission
    we bust on lil nigga's that think there the shit, but they get lost without the proper direction
    if they dont have our money on time we make there mother suck on our eriction
    skool really iz not a option nigga's rather sell weed, and get paid in action
    only advice if you ever come down to the bronx, always kno sumone
    cuz niggas have no problems running up on u and kidnapping ur son
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  2. February 18th, 2006, 09:24 PM #2
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    uhhh? lol ur name sais philly... but u say ur from the bronx... uhhh? im a lil confused about that...? the rhymes in ur piece were kinda weak, i didnt like ur rhyme format either... the structure was ok, needed a bit of work tho, vocab coulda used a lil tuning up... flow was terrible, i couldnt catch it at all... topic was kinda played... all in all a 4-5/10

    keep workin at it...
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  3. February 18th, 2006, 09:36 PM #3
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    [QUOTE=Belligerant]uhhh? lol ur name sais philly... but u say ur from the bronx... uhhh? [\QUOTE]

    word^ ahaha. fuckin fake ass to me. ahaha. no structure. not to much to really compliment in this.
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  4. February 18th, 2006, 11:43 PM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by *Young Philly*
    South Side iz Where im from, Where Blue Rags Dont Come
    Little Kids get Shot for no reason, all year 'round is known as the killing season
    I keep my nine close, ready to bust, slice the nigga's Throat
    You cant walk on the block without trippin on a glock
    and you cant fuck a bitch, without a condom on your dick
    where if u kill some one without permission you may have to pay a hugh comission
    we bust on lil nigga's that think there the shit, but they get lost without the proper direction
    if they dont have our money on time we make there mother suck on our eriction
    skool really iz not a option nigga's rather sell weed, and get paid in action
    only advice if you ever come down to the bronx, always kno sumone
    cuz niggas have no problems running up on u and kidnapping ur son
    yo man i liked this peice...you kept it real tha whole time an jus spoke bout how it is...i think it would be even better if you upp'd yer vocab an if it was a lil longer...also, if you added a hook an had 3 verses or so, it would sound more like a song than a freestyle...overal tho, igive it a 8.5/10
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  5. February 19th, 2006, 01:01 AM #5
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    you homie this is not cool i think you byte rhymes you got dq'd in one of your battles for biten canibus, whats next, now you got bronx, and you rep philly, decent rhymes, but whats the deal!
    I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
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  6. February 19th, 2006, 12:54 PM #6
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    Question WHAt?

    first off why tha fuck is young philly talken bout tha bronx????
    besides i dont know when u was in south side last but that shit fell of since Big Pun died. Second off you wear a red rag oe blue rag in South Side you get ur ass kicked by tha Latin Kings...only yellow n' gold.
    This shit is a bad joke....nah
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  7. February 19th, 2006, 01:37 PM #7
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    This was terrible just terrible.Seriously man you gotta elavate big time iight
    Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
    On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....
    But how you fall doesn't matter
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  8. February 19th, 2006, 01:37 PM #8
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    Quote Originally Posted by RhymeSkeme
    yo man i liked this peice...you kept it real tha whole time an jus spoke bout how it is...i think it would be even better if you upp'd yer vocab an if it was a lil longer...also, if you added a hook an had 3 verses or so, it would sound more like a song than a freestyle...overal tho, igive it a 8.5/10

    are you for real???
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  9. February 19th, 2006, 04:00 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by Belligerant
    uhhh? lol ur name sais philly... but u say ur from the bronx... uhhh? [\QUOTE]

    word^ ahaha. fuckin fake ass to me. ahaha. no structure. not to much to really compliment in this.

    first of all Ya niggas gotta Stfu
    Cuz i grt philly from my GrandFather who passed away
    His name Was Phil but they called him philly
    So Ya gotta Gotta stfu b4 ya know the whole story
    Ya Bum ass Bitches
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  10. February 19th, 2006, 04:02 PM #10
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    Big time u need work hommie elevate and make it longer next time
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  11. February 19th, 2006, 04:02 PM #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gost Writer
    first off why tha fuck is young philly talken bout tha bronx????
    besides i dont know when u was in south side last but that shit fell of since Big Pun died. Second off you wear a red rag oe blue rag in South Side you get ur ass kicked by tha Latin Kings...only yellow n' gold.
    This shit is a bad joke....nah

    Nigga Latin Kings Are Dead u bitch
    Who Da Fuck are you NeWays nigga?
    What part of the bronx u live in?
    Huh? do u even leave in the bronx u bitch?
    huh? Come see me bitch
    510 Jackson Ave

    U Bitch ass trick
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  12. February 19th, 2006, 04:07 PM #12
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    lol, nigga went from young philly to notorious philly. he's pissed
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  13. February 19th, 2006, 04:09 PM #13
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    your name is philly and your from the bx??? wtf is that??? and you need 2 elevate alot kid cuzz you had no wordplay and that sucked.................pz.
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  15. February 19th, 2006, 04:11 PM #15
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    omfg i said i got philly from my GrandFather Ya niggas Dont Listen
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