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Thread: 16 Bars

  1. February 19th, 2006, 09:39 AM #1
    GENERAL ILL WILL
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    Question ???

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  2. February 19th, 2006, 09:44 AM #2
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    This was ok, i didn't feel it much as the topics a lil played, but i can see ya tried, next time make the strucutre a lil better, as making the line lengths more even.....overall it's aight, Keep it Poppin'

    Also, this is a lil freestyle by me:
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  3. February 19th, 2006, 12:42 PM #3
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    A yo when i spit its sorta like me shootin a mack
    when i get started niggaz dont got no time to react

    cause im a real gunna i aint afraid ta blast the mack
    dont call me trigga happy jus say i got a fast react

    your usen tha same shit over, come on man. There are no punch lines or nothin this looks like sumthin i wrote when i was 12. Its senseless
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  4. February 19th, 2006, 02:05 PM #4
    GENERAL ILL WILL
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    Gost Writer for all you know i might just be 12 but thanks for the feed anyway
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  5. February 19th, 2006, 02:06 PM #5
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    that wasent 16 bars
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  6. February 19th, 2006, 02:15 PM #6
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  7. February 19th, 2006, 03:02 PM #7
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    yeah it was ok.....................but u still need 2 elevate..................pz.
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