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    Thugs: Life and Death

    View life through my eyes, grey skies and drive byes
    Another thug dies, whilst hearing political lies, my dog rydes
    Rags and tags, dreads and feds bodies lying all-dead
    No mourning instead, as my ink bled, police custody lead
    Me into court, to accuse that I fought, with the deceased
    Weapons greased, the feds ceased, my collar and beat
    Me down to my feet, just life on the street, the boot meets
    My face, the sole encases in my brace, they undo my lace
    Fit it around my neck, bring out a teck, and insert a fresh deck
    Smack! The butt hits my head and the floors my bed; I shed
    Blood, my wounds bled, I sled down to the ground, instead
    Of lifting me, they ecstatically watched me writhing painfully
    Then left, but I was deft, skilfully I tread and stood on my bed
    Sew through the wood, I blew away the dust, the gap grew
    Enough to let me through, eternal freedom due, I slipped
    The alarms blipped, gunshots flew, grazing and paining due
    To slugs flying to and fro, I stand up to show, see the hazy glow
    Drowning memories, old shady trees, hustling down on the streets
    My parents at home, my dome spins, my legs like stones
    Crumble and fall, I was never humble at all, yet I try and stall
    Time, by praying to God, a light shines, I hear hymns and chimes
    “Come to me”, tomorrows paper’ll report a fatality, calamity?
    See, it’s the end of my destiny, see life through another eyes
    Lord has called, more deeds, yet I’m appalled at the sins
    I committed through life, strife given; yet I tried to strive

    Now I see the world from above, where doves fly
    Silver clouds, white gloves, I’m happy, ask why
    This is a place, where there’s no inequality, no difference
    No opinions, political polls; only holy benevolence
    No me no you, there’s only us and we
    The true family, the holy trinity……
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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    I cant even front .. This a nice peice . .

    Weapons greased, the feds ceased, my collar and beat
    Me down to my feet, just life on the street, the boot meets
    My face, the sole encases in my brace, they undo my lace
    Fit it around my neck, bring out a teck, and insert a fresh deck
    Smack! The butt hits my head and the floors my bed; I shed
    Blood, my wounds bled, I sled down to the ground, instead
    Of lifting me, they ecstatically watched me writhing painfully
    Then left, but I was deft, skilfully I tread and stood on my bed


    Dopest lines in the verse .. Keep it up ..
    Flow was straight ..
    Verse structure was good ..

    Pretty good man .. Felt it .. 1

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    Thanks dog, this aint ma style, only doin it for a breather......but yeah preciate ya comments

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    nice shit homie

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    Yeah thanks dog
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    dope shit man feeling it,a lot of good multies in it,good imagery as usual,for alot of otha people this topic would have been too played to use but u took it and made it ur own.keep on goin like this and u'll get another OMHOF lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by da king01
    dope shit man feeling it,a lot of good multies in it,good imagery as usual,for alot of otha people this topic would have been too played to use but u took it and made it ur own.keep on goin like this and u'll get another OMHOF lol
    Thanks, preciate it ma dog, as for another HOF, nah i'm happy with one, i only did this to show J Christ, that theres a difference betwen thug rhymes and gangsta rhymes.......Thug rhymes aint all bout guns, cars and bimbos......Other than that, i did this as a freestyle.......Yeah thanks for the comments, preciate it

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    that was hot ma duke ill give it a 8.7/10

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    A yo thas hot doe for real son. i like da way you pu da words tagetha too, thanks for the advice on mine

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    Preciate y'all leavin feed, aight thanks
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    you that shit was hot man all around I really liked your lines keep dropin I understand and see why you got in th OMHOF man I give this a 8.8/10 that was a dope drop hit me wit some feed back link in the sig

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    Aight thanks dog, i'm a check ya stuff right now

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    okay thanks man and no problem

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