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  1. February 17th, 2006, 11:09 PM #1
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    in the air

    hook (girl voice)
    i can feel it comin in the air tonight..............oh lord
    i been waitin for this moment for all my life....oh lord
    can you feel it comin in the air tonight
    i been waitin for this moment for all my life....oh lord

    verse 1
    i keep thinkin in my mind
    that i'm bout to get signed
    i put blood, sweat, an tears
    an i conqured all my fears
    to try to make it big
    better the way i live
    cause i'm tired of bein broke
    i'm tired of bein a joke
    it's the same shit different day
    an tomorrows gonna be the same way
    i think about my life
    will i ever find a wife
    or will i just be lonley
    hangin wit my homey
    it feels like i'm stuck in the mud
    an nobody shows me love
    i feel self consious like no one likes me
    but when i get the deal every one a like me
    i feel like givin up
    befo i live it up
    i feel like callin it quits
    but somethin won't let me quit
    i gotta keep spittin
    even though i feel like quitin
    somethin tells me to keep at my dream
    one day reconnition will be redeemed
    now life ain't fair
    but i can feel it in the air
    i'm gonna get signed
    when the time is right
    i feel it's my time
    big-j bout to shine

    hook

    verse 2
    a sparks lit at my ass it's about to ignite
    i'm bout to get signed it's in the air tonight
    i bennefit from the strife
    writin bout my life
    if you don't like it then too damn bad
    bein a country boy well thats the new fab
    i refuse to change
    country i'm a remaine
    i rap about real shit
    so you can feel the shit
    if you don't like it i don't give a damn
    cause what you see an hear thats what i am
    shit keeps gettin worse
    it's like i been cursed
    i got a girl now
    but how long will she stick around
    i don't really know
    cause god's the only one that knows
    lifes one big gamble
    it's like a big shamble
    it gets worse by the day
    or at least it feels that way
    but i can feel it in the air tonight
    tomorrows when i'm gone get signed
    an then comes the tours
    along wit the whores
    then comes the fans
    but i done gotta plan

    hook

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  2. February 17th, 2006, 11:10 PM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=273134
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  3. February 18th, 2006, 03:18 AM #3
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    yo this is hot. i like the hook.
    and tha 1st verse tell's it all
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  4. February 18th, 2006, 12:08 PM #4
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    thanx dawg but the hook is an old genisis song so i just used it an htanx for the feed. uppin

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  5. February 18th, 2006, 03:13 PM #5
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    uppin ya'll i need feed what the fuck ya'll sleepin on this for

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  6. February 18th, 2006, 03:16 PM #6
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    man this wasnt really good, the flow was Fucked up, the ryhmes were not coming 2gether it sounded like a too short song, mayne u got alot of Working to do
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  7. February 18th, 2006, 03:17 PM #7
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    thanks for the feed man. but the song is fast paced rymin if that helps ya any. thats the way i recorded it. an it sounds pretty good

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  8. February 18th, 2006, 04:28 PM #8
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    uhm not bad still as a song.. u put some emotion in between da lines but diddnt put much intention in the rhymes
    so the flow kind of lost impact in my opinion.. needed a bit mo rawness to it
    and a bit mo complexity to the flo would of been good.. keep practicing still..

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  9. February 18th, 2006, 05:35 PM #9
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    thanx dawg will practice

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  10. February 18th, 2006, 11:36 PM #10
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  11. February 19th, 2006, 10:02 AM #11
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  12. February 19th, 2006, 02:43 PM #12
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    hey u in the crew or wot? ent heard from ya for time b... holla
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