PS: Marvin (0-0) Vs. Automatic (0-0)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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Verses due Friday 12am EST
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[Automatic.]

Marv!

12.

[GameTime.]

sup bitch. 12 it is.

[GameTime.]

hijo de puta

imma wreck him, best get to steppin cus i'm hectic with clips
talk bout ya verse.. i'll gunit so much you'd think i was repping the click
stop frontin like you real nice man you could barely reach titles
so imma be callin ya bluff like i had it on speed dial
you don't wanna step to 'vin, rest since this is where ya text'll end
cus your rhymes got jack shit.. and a few other people's excrements
u stink of shit brother, when i call you gay, don't even think that i'd stutter
since Manual ain't just your opposite, he's also your significant other
and ya mommas very fond of me she said "gimme some o' dat dick baby"
so i shot all over her chest and face like my real name was Dick Cheney
last two bars, leave you like tupac and have this puta with bruised scars
this was fucking easy, win's more automatic than you are

lmfao. bye.

[Automatic.]

ur gettin straight floored, u aint got shit on me whore
i aint just saying u cant handle auto ..its what ur kinds known for
ur lines are wack dude, packed with more MT punches then ur crew
while my lines make ur jaw drop a whole lot better then u
GameTime, Marv, Miss CC ..no matter which name ur still gettin clowned
but damn dude, u've got more banned names then MTV's rock countdown
never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in
now u stick up for Chrit cuz he ghosted for u, kid u aint a writer
so if ur mentioned in legends ..its just cuz u kept dicken that biter
imma fighter, and i got a thing for ya girl, sorry i shuldve told u sooner
so after i beat both u AND ur girl .........i hope u'll enjoy Jr.

EDIT: most of u post in the lounge so u shuld get the landslide personal, if not.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=273268

[Tactics.]

imma wreck him, best get to steppin cus i'm hectic with clips
talk bout ya verse.. i'll gunit so much you'd think i was repping the click
Na
stop frontin like you real nice man you could barely reach titles
so imma be callin ya bluff like i had it on speed dial
Wack
you don't wanna step to 'vin, rest since this is where ya text'll end
cus your rhymes got jack shit.. and a few other people's excrements
No
u stink of shit brother, when i call you gay, don't even think that i'd stutter
since Manual ain't just your opposite, he's also your significant other
ha
and ya mommas very fond of me she said "gimme some o' dat dick baby"
so i shot all over her chest and face like my real name was Dick Cheney
LMAO
last two bars, leave you like tupac and have this puta with bruised scars
this was fucking easy, win's more automatic than you are
LMAO



ur gettin straight floored, u aint got shit on me whore
i aint just saying u cant handle auto ..its what ur kinds known for
Meh
ur lines are wack dude, packed with more MT punches then ur crew
while my lines make ur jaw drop a whole lot better then u
LMAO
GameTime, Marv, Miss CC ..no matter which name ur still gettin clowned
but damn dude, u've got more banned names then MTV's rock countdown
Meh
never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in
Meh
now u stick up for Chrit cuz he ghosted for u, kid u aint a writer
so if ur mentioned in legends ..its just cuz u kept dicken that biter
Meh
imma fighter, and i got a thing for ya girl, sorry i shuldve told u sooner
so after i beat both u AND ur girl .........i hope u'll enjoy Jr.
lol

v-Auto Easy

[Meks.]

imma wreck him, best get to steppin cus i'm hectic with clips
talk bout ya verse.. i'll gunit so much you'd think i was repping the click
nah
stop frontin like you real nice man you could barely reach titles
so imma be callin ya bluff like i had it on speed dial
nice
you don't wanna step to 'vin, rest since this is where ya text'll end
cus your rhymes got jack shit.. and a few other people's excrements
lol fire
u stink of shit brother, when i call you gay, don't even think that i'd stutter
since Manual ain't just your opposite, he's also your significant other
damn u comin at his neck
and ya mommas very fond of me she said "gimme some o' dat dick baby"
so i shot all over her chest and face like my real name was Dick Cheney
Ha..
last two bars, leave you like tupac and have this puta with bruised scars
this was fucking easy, win's more automatic than you are
ok..

nice verse couple witty lines n shit

next

ur gettin straight floored, u aint got shit on me whore
i aint just saying u cant handle auto ..its what ur kinds known for
No
ur lines are wack dude, packed with more MT punches then ur crew
while my lines make ur jaw drop a whole lot better then u
decent
GameTime, Marv, Miss CC ..no matter which name ur still gettin clowned
but damn dude, u've got more banned names then MTV's rock countdown
decent but played banned/band
never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in
ehh decent personal punch wasnt great
now u stick up for Chrit cuz he ghosted for u, kid u aint a writer
so if ur mentioned in legends ..its just cuz u kept dicken that biter
ok
imma fighter, and i got a thing for ya girl, sorry i shuldve told u sooner
so after i beat both u AND ur girl .........i hope u'll enjoy Jr.
no

ehh u coulda came more consistent

vote - marv better verse.

[Mr. Key]

you don't wanna step to 'vin, rest since this is where ya text'll end
cus your rhymes got jack shit.. and a few other people's excrements
u stink of shit brother, when i call you gay, don't even think that i'd stutter
since Manual ain't just your opposite, he's also your significant other
and ya mommas very fond of me she said "gimme some o' dat dick baby"
so i shot all over her chest and face like my real name was Dick Cheney

vs

ur lines are wack dude, packed with more MT punches then ur crew
while my lines make ur jaw drop a whole lot better then u
GameTime, Marv, Miss CC ..no matter which name ur still gettin clowned
but damn dude, u've got more banned names then MTV's rock countdown

v/ Marv, pretty good battle, but Marv got it, I was impressed with Auto. LMAO ath the excrements line though, good shit.

[TrillioN]

imma wreck him, best get to steppin cus i'm hectic with clips
talk bout ya verse.. i'll gunit so much you'd think i was repping the click
^ nah. coulda worded it better at least.
stop frontin like you real nice man you could barely reach titles
so imma be callin ya bluff like i had it on speed dial
^ Eh...
you don't wanna step to 'vin, rest since this is where ya text'll end
cus your rhymes got jack shit.. and a few other people's excrements
^ no.
u stink of shit brother, when i call you gay, don't even think that i'd stutter
since Manual ain't just your opposite, he's also your significant other
^ Blah
and ya mommas very fond of me she said "gimme some o' dat dick baby"
so i shot all over her chest and face like my real name was Dick Cheney
^ no.
last two bars, leave you like tupac and have this puta with bruised scars
this was fucking easy, win's more automatic than you are
^ no lol.

vs.

ur gettin straight floored, u aint got shit on me whore
i aint just saying u cant handle auto ..its what ur kinds known for
^ no.
ur lines are wack dude, packed with more MT punches then ur crew
while my lines make ur jaw drop a whole lot better then u
^ Bitten, If Not Then Played And Obvious.
GameTime, Marv, Miss CC ..no matter which name ur still gettin clowned
but damn dude, u've got more banned names then MTV's rock countdown
^ no. used.
never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in
^ nope
now u stick up for Chrit cuz he ghosted for u, kid u aint a writer
so if ur mentioned in legends ..its just cuz u kept dicken that biter
^ nope yo.
imma fighter, and i got a thing for ya girl, sorry i shuldve told u sooner
so after i beat both u AND ur girl .........i hope u'll enjoy Jr.
^ noppeee.

v/ - Marf. Pz.

[Tae Profit]

you don't wanna step to 'vin, rest since this is where ya text'll end
cus your rhymes got jack shit.. and a few other people's excrements
last two bars, leave you like tupac and have this puta with bruised scars
this was fucking easy, win's more automatic than you are

vs.

never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in
imma fighter, and i got a thing for ya girl, sorry i shuldve told u sooner
so after i beat both u AND ur girl .........i hope u'll enjoy Jr.

i dunno, i wasnt feelin the dick cheney line, wasnt all that...and i gotta give it to automatic for his closer and the personal bout the landslide, marv's closer was too easy...real FL.

[Cody Nash]

and ya mommas very fond of me she said "gimme some o' dat dick baby"
so i shot all over her chest and face like my real name was Dick Cheney
last two bars, leave you like tupac and have this puta with bruised scars
this was fucking easy, win's more automatic than you are
^Nice

vs

never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in
imma fighter, and i got a thing for ya girl, sorry i shuldve told u sooner
so after i beat both u AND ur girl .........i hope u'll enjoy Jr.
^Good.

Both of you had some weak personals and also good concepts thrown in too. You both've done better. But I think Auto took it.

V/auto

[E s c]

ur lines are wack dude, packed with more MT punches then ur crew
while my lines make ur jaw drop a whole lot better then u

I've seen this before by a member of AM and it went something like

your packing jabs yet i'm coming with the haymakers dude
so when your jaw drops... it'll drop harder than you


Or something like that.

[B.I.Detained.]

Marv:
stop frontin like you real nice man you could barely reach titles
so imma be callin ya bluff like i had it on speed dial
u stink of shit brother, when i call you gay, don't even think that i'd stutter
since Manual ain't just your opposite, he's also your significant other

Auto:
ur lines are wack dude, packed with more MT punches then ur crew
while my lines make ur jaw drop a whole lot better then u
never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in

Overall:
Battle had more quotables than I thought it would. I think wording
was a biggie in this battle, and there would have been some more
doper punches. I thought the excrement line was weak, just cuz
it didn't feel harsh. Coulda been dope though. Auto had a nice verse
but some sloppy ass punches..i.e. The banned name line.. just wasn't
a punch in all honesty. But a nice battle overall. Auto is getting quite
dope. But Marv wasa little better.

Vote: Marv

[Mars.]

you don't wanna step to 'vin, rest since this is where ya text'll end
cus your rhymes got jack shit.. and a few other people's excrements
u stink of shit brother, when i call you gay, don't even think that i'd stutter
since Manual ain't just your opposite, he's also your significant other

v.

never gettin crowned, i take that back ...u never gettin a win
cuz this is more of a landslide then that shit we hoped u died in

cool battle, didn't feel like marv showed hard, but he still was way more witty, gj.

[Automatic.]

3-5 Marv.

Good battle homie.

(I hope MM doesnt make the people go to the 2nd section of LLL based on a loss here and actually reads the verses =/)