YOUNG DEE VS. kool_killa

YOUNG DEE · April 29th, 2003, 06:42 PM

rules
1- 10-15 lines
2- no d/riding or c/votes
3-must post within 20 minutes of mine or you forfeit
4- let's do this

YOUNG DEE · April 29th, 2003, 06:50 PM

I'm crewless/ so it's useless, trying to battle me on the solo!
So is it kool if i leave ya toothless and smash off kicking up major gravel!/
Rustle and Wrangle you up!/ knock you off of your saddle!/
And just like your daddy would/ i'll put you over my knee and give you a paddle!/
Go taddle!/ if you must/ pm someone to get a vote!/
but i'm real with this here/ YOUNG DEE is never no HOUX!/
practice your methods/ and go over your raps!/
but when i'm through with you, i'll be the one that cancelled all of your plans!
Kool-killa i'll peel ya!/ like i was getting ready to fry some taters!/
your raps are so weak/ you couldn't reach me, if you couldn't get past the gators!

**kool-killa** · April 29th, 2003, 06:58 PM

20 minutes? thats a gay ass rule....anyways i was already writin a battle...here:

*graps tha mic and gets in mic dee's face*

ayo:

fuck CAPS i spit rage, when iam in tha sick phrase, my punches will blast your rip cage, like i was spitting ‘fire’ with 12 gauge//
stoppin me on this page, thats like bein paid minimum wage, and tryin to sue bill gates//
lyrically gifted, metaphorically vicious, who said satan's wicked? they lied, iam more malicious//
i still havent said shit~you dont wanna test this, cuz i bring real piss, that will hurt this bitch, and make him wanna quit//
oh shit-my bad, iam being i dick-like ya dad, i shudda make this handi-capped, and like your dad, busted in ya ass a big gap//
young dee, tha wackest mc, cudnt bust a cap if he busted his knee, I spit tightly, your worthless like a batter out in strike three, so heres summtin: bite me//
And I aint jokin, your hopin, to blaze me..but youll die choking, cuz I been dead~they just left the casket open//
You cant be copin, with this lyrical overdosin, youll be soakin~ wet~ cuz my rhymes a-dick an iam strokin//

YOUNG DEE · April 29th, 2003, 07:00 PM

this is supposed to be a flow and not written! SUCCA

**kool-killa** · April 29th, 2003, 07:01 PM

yeah thats a flow! i was already writin your verse dumb fuck....besides how can this be a live freestyle if it aint awdio?....
uppin!

**kool-killa** · April 29th, 2003, 07:22 PM

UPPIN!

**kool-killa** · April 30th, 2003, 12:57 PM

uppin....

-_- · April 30th, 2003, 01:10 PM

Kool_Killa got this his werdplay, and his vocab got him this battle, YOUNG DEE, ur verse and structure was to original to pull the WIN in my eyes.

Vote = Kool_Killa

**kool-killa** · April 30th, 2003, 07:09 PM

uppin

**Icarus** · April 30th, 2003, 07:31 PM

kool-killa won this on becuase he had better punches and he had some phat flow, nice job linking all of your sentences 2gether so that most of it ryhmed seamlessly, keep l-e-v8-n, both of u