Little Orphan Annie [Writer's Block Collab]

[Siege]

no it is not "peace out" there is not peace between a sea of raging despicable feed and a yacht full of excellent Open Mic-goers

agreed with Nostradamus.

shape up, faggots

[big j da fat boy]

bitch shut the fuck up i wasn't talkin to you an if you was a om goer then you would get what the fuck i'm sayin about vocab. so think before you run ya lip cause you might meet my hallow tip bitch. an who the fuck you callin a fag i think you lookin in the mirror talkin to me man cause the only fag i can think of is you bitch

[Nostradomus.]

We know what we're fucking talking about you fucking imbosal. We're both in the HoF at least 2 times, maybe more. There will be more. So shut your fucking fuckedface mouth before I have to shut it for you.

[big j da fat boy]

would you like to tell me how you gone do that. i'm just curious ya know considering i was just tryin to see if you know what you talkin about in those big words you use i didn't want beef i just wanted to see more vocab. is that too much to ask an then you get pissed so what the fuck man

[Artist.]

Chris.

Nice poetry @ the beginining, it really makes me feel hot , the vocab was perfect maybe ad a little more, ur imagery was nice i could tell by the poetry at the begining of the verse this was gonna be nice, Ur emotion was illy too, ur 1st couple lines were dope, overall dope peice

Ian.

"How does one smile when one is punished for talking?
And how does one enoy life when papa's always stalking?
Good opener^^ reading this made me wanna read more, ur vocab wasnt really extremely good like most decent om's but ur emotion and flow made up for it, ur rhyme scheme was kinda basic but this peice was really good.

Mike.

Wtf @ ur structure, even though structure doesnt really matter it is a nice trait to add with flow, this was a perfect mixture of poetry and topical, ur vocab was really nice and ur rhyme scheme shouldnt be so complex for these kiddies, this is one of ur more indepth verses ive seen u drop, good job.

[Siege]

upping

[Nostradomus.]

Wow @ this, up.

[Nostradomus.]

Too bad Edicius, Brixton, or anybody else that got feed from us doesnt leave feed here.

[Nostradomus.]

WHoa @ the feed!!!

[tonecrusher]

In some places, the drop gave me that warm feelin' in ma stomach XD. You know, when you feel like 'shit, it can't be better'. All of y'all done good spits, OM's holdin' on guyz like you, no bull.
Obviously, there are weaker lines, but that doesn't fuck it up badly.

So keep goin', homiez.

Peace.

Krit!cal

["lil Neefy"]

Come on people, come feed this ...

[Siege]

wzord.... wayting for ok feed

[Phayme]

Lol.

I thought this was dope.

Nos - You came very nice, Instantly i knew you would come nice, those opening lines were just dope. Very nice peice. Dope use of multies. some complex writing man. But not too complex which was dope, It got the point across perfectly. Dopness

White- Nice peice again. The rhetorical questions at the begging set your peice up perfectly. Few spelling mistakes which caused me too pause. But thsi was nice, I like your storyline. Keep writing.


Siege- Again another nice peice added. Very poetic, opening stanze was dope. Your peice had great imagery, i could picture this child in my head, Some very nice descriptions. Dope peice man. Keep writing.


Word, this was dope. The picture at the begging was a nice addition too.
KEep it up fellas.


Hit up mine and Nlit End peice please?

thanks

[Nostradomus.]

*does the macarena*

Thanks buddy-old pal. *leaves feed on urs*

[Code Red]

O some real shit this waz a dope ass peice hommie
U always bring dopeness to OM when u drop
I feel lik ya emtions in this were brought to life like on film
U really have great imaginary in all ya peices
Anotha HOF piece in my eyes Fam
To me I say that all waz dope in this peice
Wordplay waz dope emtion waz great and imaginary waz great
Multi waz dope and all waz dope in here